For the Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Fluffy My Cat"This is going to be about my animals that I love
42 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Teri,
Your joy and contentment in your dear pet is evident in every line you write!
I'm not a CAT-holic, but I love my dog. I know exactly what you mean. :)
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali :)
Usually she is (lying) in my lap asleep
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Hello Teri,
Your joy and contentment in your dear pet is evident in every line you write!
I'm not a CAT-holic, but I love my dog. I know exactly what you mean. :)
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali :)
Usually she is (lying) in my lap asleep
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review. That is the way my Fluffy is with me. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Tessa Kay
I have budgies now, but we used to have cats. I love their personalities. Every one is different. Shame you couldn't have posted a picture of the real Fluffy.
Lovely acrostic. All the best in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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I have budgies now, but we used to have cats. I love their personalities. Every one is different. Shame you couldn't have posted a picture of the real Fluffy.
Lovely acrostic. All the best in the contest. :)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review. The picture of this cat looks like my real Fluffy. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a sweet and sentimental acrostic poem for the contest you've managed to create here, Teri. I think you'll do very well in the voting booth with this.
I feel our pets are much more than simply animals, and it galls me when someone says to me about my three dogs, "Aw, c'mon, it's just a dog!" Our pets are as much a member of our families as anyone (or anything) else. In some cases, like my 12 year-old Chihuahua, Gidget, as well as your cute kitty, Fluffy, there are our best friends and four-legged companions.
A lovely tribute to your furry friend, Teri.
Good luck to you in the booth.
~Dean Kuch :}
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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What a sweet and sentimental acrostic poem for the contest you've managed to create here, Teri. I think you'll do very well in the voting booth with this.
I feel our pets are much more than simply animals, and it galls me when someone says to me about my three dogs, "Aw, c'mon, it's just a dog!" Our pets are as much a member of our families as anyone (or anything) else. In some cases, like my 12 year-old Chihuahua, Gidget, as well as your cute kitty, Fluffy, there are our best friends and four-legged companions.
A lovely tribute to your furry friend, Teri.
Good luck to you in the booth.
~Dean Kuch :}
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Dean you are so right. I consider my girls to be my family along with the others. They are very special. hugs, Teri
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Hugs to you and your girls too, Teri.
~Dean :)
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Thanks Dean and give Gidget a hug from me to her
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Consider it done. :)
Comment from JanPerry
A lot of fun and you described your cat well.
Lots of fun rhyming. Perhaps put in more adjectives to describe Fluffy - your cat.
"silver peroxide, eyes a steely black" will bring the poem to life.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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A lot of fun and you described your cat well.
Lots of fun rhyming. Perhaps put in more adjectives to describe Fluffy - your cat.
"silver peroxide, eyes a steely black" will bring the poem to life.
Thanks.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thanks for your review and comments. Hugs, Teri
Comment from rjuselius
Awww. This is a sweet piece of poetry dear Teri! Although it lacks finesse, it's very cute. I think the simplicity of the poem does you a favor.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Awww. This is a sweet piece of poetry dear Teri! Although it lacks finesse, it's very cute. I think the simplicity of the poem does you a favor.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from CEO2020
Sometimes intentions outweigh production. Cute poem about your cat. For me your second paragraph is the essence of your poem - "My cat brings so much joy into my life
You wouldn't believe how she relieves all my strife"
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Sometimes intentions outweigh production. Cute poem about your cat. For me your second paragraph is the essence of your poem - "My cat brings so much joy into my life
You wouldn't believe how she relieves all my strife"
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Teri7, this is a very loving poem in tribute to you cat Fluffy. I can feel the love when reading this piece and can see and hear the purring of a very contented cat sitting on your lap. A peaceful and enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Teri7, this is a very loving poem in tribute to you cat Fluffy. I can feel the love when reading this piece and can see and hear the purring of a very contented cat sitting on your lap. A peaceful and enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the great review. She is everything and then some. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Neonewman
What an awesome acrostic piece you have crafted well for this particular writing prompt my friend! I have 2 males, Booster and Harvey and they are a mess lol!
God bless!
STeve
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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What an awesome acrostic piece you have crafted well for this particular writing prompt my friend! I have 2 males, Booster and Harvey and they are a mess lol!
God bless!
STeve
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Steve, We have 7 female cats that have been fixed and declawed. We love them so much. hugs, Teri
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These were born in March, it is time to do the same to them lol!
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These were born in March, it is time to do the same to them lol!
Comment from patcelaw
If I were to own a pet it would have to be a cat. But, being old I cannot have a pet as I am very unsure on my feet and fear having a pet they might get under my feet and cause me to fall. Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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If I were to own a pet it would have to be a cat. But, being old I cannot have a pet as I am very unsure on my feet and fear having a pet they might get under my feet and cause me to fall. Patricia
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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That is very true my friend. My fluffy is my little angel girl. hugs, Teri
Comment from Jay Squires
It's obvious from reading this (even before reading the author notes), that you really love cats. You did a really good job complying with the rules and still having an entertaining and intelligent poem:
Only one small nit:
Usually she is laying in my lap asleep [...is LYING in my lap asleep...>> no change in meter.]
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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It's obvious from reading this (even before reading the author notes), that you really love cats. You did a really good job complying with the rules and still having an entertaining and intelligent poem:
Only one small nit:
Usually she is laying in my lap asleep [...is LYING in my lap asleep...>> no change in meter.]
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Jay. She is the love of my life as far as cats go. hugs, Teri
