Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This limerick, Fickle Love, takes a bit of figuring as the matchups are a bit dizzying at first. I guess, in the end, Ben gets Jill and Bill gets Jen.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015

Hi Bill yes it is a bit confusing I even got confused while writing this lol but thanks heaps for reading and giving it a great review Cheers

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Wow1
This was a great read.
This is what I call a food for thought poem for sure..... meaning after you read it you go mm.
I'm not sure I'm ready for this yet. LOL
Cookie

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hi Cookie .Thanks for reading my limerick and giving it a great review. .Not sure if I'm ready for it either lol glad you stooped by Cheers😃

reply by misscookie on 20-Oct-2015

You're very welcome.
Have a nice day.
Cookie

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Talk about form and style! It was easy to get the syllable count, but you really wrote a good, but confusing limerick, as it should be.
-I see this as a very complex math problem--one of those involved word problems with logic.
-I have no other reviews to go by, so I have to conclude that somehow everyone is with the person they want to be, one way or the other!
-Good job!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hi respa1. so glad you thought it a good job I had a bit of fun trying to work out the end result No logic used I'm afraid, but I needed Ben to end up with Jill lol Cheers for your encouraging words.

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Oct-2015

You did a very good job, and you definitely had a puzzle. I don't know how you did that!!

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I felt the art work was very fitting
for the words of this poem that has been
written, great creativity and poem in many ways.

Honeytree

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Thanks Honeytree for your terrific review and comments, I always try to do something a bot different lol so glad you liked it Cheers

reply by honeytree on 20-Oct-2015

Great to read

Annie

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

where have we ben?
Jill-ted lovers again
Jen-erous....with thrills...on them hills
What was the bill? For the thrills....and who got who? In the end
Cos trying to get it straight twisted me round the Ben-d
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Ha ha kiwijenny yes a bit like that for this one I nearly went round the ben....d trying to put it altogether but glad it worked love your clever review Cheers

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, A fun limerick and a brain twister too.

Of note:

Then Bill he found out about Jen
Who loved him instead of young Ben
From Bill, Ben stole Jill
This gave her a thrill
Cause not Bill she loved but her Ben

(Ohhh, the confusion of the heart or could it be confusion from a pint of beer and a few shots of whiskey - lol.)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015

Hi Latebloomer Thank you for stopping by to have a read and giving this a great review and rating . I think I had better stay of the beer and whisky as the wine is enough if this is what it produces ha ha Cheers

Comment from twinklepoems

Excellent

Is this the poetic version of "Bill, Carol, Ted and Alice"? I really hope everyone got who they deserved! It all flows well except the last line does not flow quite as well as your other lines (but I don't know why). Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015

Hi twinklepoems I thank you for your review and tend to agree about the last line so have made a small change and hope it reads more smoothly now. Just having some fun with this genre and sometimes not sure what comes oir of my brain lol Cheers and thanks

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve
For Bill and Ben and Jill and Jen I couldn't get my tongue round them
And if this lot were lesbian gays they'd tangle up in different ways
That might have been a lot less natural than this limerick of love's quadrilateral

Fun suite from the emerald isle.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015

Hi panygynt. A big thanks for your dissective review and great rating I had fun reading it and enjoyed your fun comments. Cheers for your time

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Haha - this is fun to read. Of course I had to go through it a couple times to get everyone straight. Actually, I'm still not sure who's the loser. I guess it's Bill. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015

Hi Lou yes I think Bill is the loser here got lost myself a few times lol but enjoyed your review and really appreciate your support for this one So Thanks and sending Cheers

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

Well Bill, Ben, Jill and Jen seem to have a real roller-coaster life, and that's without Jack and his bucket arriving on the scene. Loved your humour and this is a lovely read. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015

Thank you John for reading and reviewing my limerick. heavens no we don't need Jack All too confusing as is Enjoyed your comments and thanks for your best wishes Cheers