A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Pirate's Mistress"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from OnyxSapphire78
What a great poem! Nothing like good woman to anchor a man. Great symbolism. The artwork couldn't be more appropriate. Good luck and happy writing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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What a great poem! Nothing like good woman to anchor a man. Great symbolism. The artwork couldn't be more appropriate. Good luck and happy writing!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thanks OS, I really am delighted that you enjoyed my lil work :) I see you are a new name...I will have to mosey over and return the kindness.
Always,
Missy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
You have chosen beautiful artwork. A love poem oh I think every girl loves her bad boy, bandit, pirate. Wait I didn't say that out loud LOL. As always you have written another stunning love poem. Fabulous!!!
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Missy,
You have chosen beautiful artwork. A love poem oh I think every girl loves her bad boy, bandit, pirate. Wait I didn't say that out loud LOL. As always you have written another stunning love poem. Fabulous!!!
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Yes yes yes...the bad boy :)
I love romance novels about pirates...so when I saw this photo I had to write.
Thanks hon for the always encouraging review, sista!!
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
Aye, Lass. Baton down them hatches. Shiver me timbers...me thinks she's gonna blow! So sorry, Missy. But I get carried away sometimes. A-hem...
Well, now we "bad boys" know just a little more about what wets your whistle, so to speak. But hey, "bad boys" are chameleons -- very adept at adapting to the situations and opportunities they're presented with.
"...coming to me for a lil' while." I'd add some punctuation here, Missy. An apostrophe to lil' would be sufficient, I think, so it reads as written...
"Oh, Pirate, my pirate, take me to paradise....Great consonance of "P" here.
You chart the course on my body with your hands and lips ......NICE!
Anchor here ...in the solitude of my love......
Anchor...where, pray tell, Lass?
Sultry, steamy...seductive...
We set sail at dawn!
Lovely poem, Missy... ~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Aye, Lass. Baton down them hatches. Shiver me timbers...me thinks she's gonna blow! So sorry, Missy. But I get carried away sometimes. A-hem...
Well, now we "bad boys" know just a little more about what wets your whistle, so to speak. But hey, "bad boys" are chameleons -- very adept at adapting to the situations and opportunities they're presented with.
"...coming to me for a lil' while." I'd add some punctuation here, Missy. An apostrophe to lil' would be sufficient, I think, so it reads as written...
"Oh, Pirate, my pirate, take me to paradise....Great consonance of "P" here.
You chart the course on my body with your hands and lips ......NICE!
Anchor here ...in the solitude of my love......
Anchor...where, pray tell, Lass?
Sultry, steamy...seductive...
We set sail at dawn!
Lovely poem, Missy... ~Dean ;)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Oh Captain, I don't know what to say except...I'll be READY :)
I will take care of the punctuation ASAP.
Thanks hon for the lovely review, Dean.
XX Missy XX
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Ahoy...thare she blows!
You're very welcome, my pirate princess...
~Dean ;)
Comment from Linda Engel
I can see him now, dark, swarthy hair, brown eyes, hard as a rock chest. *sigh*
What a romantic, sexy poem of a maiden in love with her lusty pirate. Excellent imagery. I love Oh Pirate, my pirate, take me to paradise. *sigh, again*
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I can see him now, dark, swarthy hair, brown eyes, hard as a rock chest. *sigh*
What a romantic, sexy poem of a maiden in love with her lusty pirate. Excellent imagery. I love Oh Pirate, my pirate, take me to paradise. *sigh, again*
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Dang woman you got good eyes...lol. I know he does, a fine specimen!!!
Thanks sugga for the understanding review ~sigh~
Missy
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Robyn and I were just talking today that the next photo is of the ocean and I thought about a pirate and the maiden poem. but told her she could run with that instead of me. then I saw your poem... who da thunk it!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
okay... that's it... no more Mr Nice guy... so it's the bad boy thing that wets your sails?
Ah... I'd be taken ye through some tempestuous seas and delivering you into the gentle rockin of me pleasuring sanctuary's cove... me place I knows you know... my sweet young thing, I charter's me course... direct and powerful, but no anchor shall we needs... for me plans to drift at the mercy of the ebbing tides and let the sea wash ov'r our souls and body... mmmmmm, let's do that again!
Beautiful work here Missy... there is a strength in you choice of metaphor that keeps perusing the intent... and seen as though I virtually live in the salt water, this theme and well, romantic dream appeals to my nature... yes there is a real swash-buckling adventure ascribed within each wave of thought.
A couple of little suggestions if I may?
I feel the mistress here, your heart is hers, I(,) the stolen moments...
coming to me for a lil(') while...
and I would place the ellipses as I so often do like this... I cherish these times... few as they are... so it allows the pause... but I'm probably only nit-pickin there.
No matter, a truly wonderful construction... and yes, a truly romantic notion... indeed... keep the keenness of your sight fixed on the allure of the moon, for your time is nigh and the sails in are in view!
With our thoughts we create,
rolling swells,
James vx's.
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi Missy,
okay... that's it... no more Mr Nice guy... so it's the bad boy thing that wets your sails?
Ah... I'd be taken ye through some tempestuous seas and delivering you into the gentle rockin of me pleasuring sanctuary's cove... me place I knows you know... my sweet young thing, I charter's me course... direct and powerful, but no anchor shall we needs... for me plans to drift at the mercy of the ebbing tides and let the sea wash ov'r our souls and body... mmmmmm, let's do that again!
Beautiful work here Missy... there is a strength in you choice of metaphor that keeps perusing the intent... and seen as though I virtually live in the salt water, this theme and well, romantic dream appeals to my nature... yes there is a real swash-buckling adventure ascribed within each wave of thought.
A couple of little suggestions if I may?
I feel the mistress here, your heart is hers, I(,) the stolen moments...
coming to me for a lil(') while...
and I would place the ellipses as I so often do like this... I cherish these times... few as they are... so it allows the pause... but I'm probably only nit-pickin there.
No matter, a truly wonderful construction... and yes, a truly romantic notion... indeed... keep the keenness of your sight fixed on the allure of the moon, for your time is nigh and the sails in are in view!
With our thoughts we create,
rolling swells,
James vx's.
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I just love your reviews, James. They are a glimps inside the man, I believe :)
Thank you so much for all of your generous words. I will look to fixing the points you suggested :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is really lovely and beautifully constructed as it sets a stage of fantasy mixed with genuine passion. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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This is really lovely and beautifully constructed as it sets a stage of fantasy mixed with genuine passion. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi Monica. Thank you so much hon for the lovely review. Once I get through with these replies, I will go over to reviews and get yours hon.
Always,
Missy
Comment from MacMhuirich
Nicely crafted naughty nautical tale, the romance, the longing and the yo-ho-ho are all there nailed to the mast. Very enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Nicely crafted naughty nautical tale, the romance, the longing and the yo-ho-ho are all there nailed to the mast. Very enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Smiling, thank you John, for this lovely review. I am delighted to see your name here :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Dawn Munro
....shh...don't spoil the mood created by this sensual beauty...
I stand on the deck and feel the salt spray on my eyelids and lips. I, too, admire the tall, dark, commanding and knee-weakening beauty of your pirate.
Would that such poetry could come alive and steal us away...
Fabulous, Misty!!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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....shh...don't spoil the mood created by this sensual beauty...
I stand on the deck and feel the salt spray on my eyelids and lips. I, too, admire the tall, dark, commanding and knee-weakening beauty of your pirate.
Would that such poetry could come alive and steal us away...
Fabulous, Misty!!!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hiya Pretty woman, thanks for this lovely review. I am just delighted that you used your valuable time to
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...sigh... You're most welcome!
Comment from Domino 2
Fabulous apt artwork, and colour presentation, Missy.
Nice touches of alliteration in this dramatic free verse.
Excellent imagery of the strong, dashing pirate who still needs rest and love on the occasions he returns to you for sustenance.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Fabulous apt artwork, and colour presentation, Missy.
Nice touches of alliteration in this dramatic free verse.
Excellent imagery of the strong, dashing pirate who still needs rest and love on the occasions he returns to you for sustenance.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi Ray, thanks for stopping by and leaving this charming review.
xo
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
Very steamy poem, and one that reminds me of the historical romance novels that are my secret delight. Great poem and great love story within the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Very steamy poem, and one that reminds me of the historical romance novels that are my secret delight. Great poem and great love story within the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thank you, precious. I wrote this before sleep and it just came right out. I had the picture in my mind. :)
I am delighted you found it to your liking.
Missy
