A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Mirror Image"Assorted poems of love
27 total reviews
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
I love your mirror image. Truth versus lie, trust versus doubt, forgiveness versus blame. I love the artwork. We do need to let things go but it is hard to let lies just drift on by. Fantastic writing.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Missy,
I love your mirror image. Truth versus lie, trust versus doubt, forgiveness versus blame. I love the artwork. We do need to let things go but it is hard to let lies just drift on by. Fantastic writing.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thanks, Darlene. I was stupid, but I guess love does that to you, blinds you. I am still learning at 62. lol
Missy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the presentation--the color scheme works well, the artwork is perfect, and your well chosen words work to create a great poem with an important message.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the presentation--the color scheme works well, the artwork is perfect, and your well chosen words work to create a great poem with an important message.
I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Janny, thank you for the swell review, hon.
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
This well resonate with many I'm sure.
Mirror opposites - great analysis of it.
Forgiveness is the best gift ever.
Great job Missy.
Teresa
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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This well resonate with many I'm sure.
Mirror opposites - great analysis of it.
Forgiveness is the best gift ever.
Great job Missy.
Teresa
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hey girlie, How are you? I am struggling with catching up, but I will persevere :)
Thanks for the genuinely generous review, sweetie.
Always,
Missy
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I am busy too. I don't review near as much as I used too. I'm taking a Comp. II class through the community college and it is keeping me very busy but I like it a lot:)
Take care Missy.
Teresa
Comment from scongrove
Great words of wisdom, Missy! :)
If only we could all follow this. Letting go is the beginning of the healing process. This has taken me years to learn. Only when you do this, can you move on.
Thank you for sharing this. The picture is beautiful, going perfect with your emotional words that express forgiveness, and healing.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Great words of wisdom, Missy! :)
If only we could all follow this. Letting go is the beginning of the healing process. This has taken me years to learn. Only when you do this, can you move on.
Thank you for sharing this. The picture is beautiful, going perfect with your emotional words that express forgiveness, and healing.
Shana :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Shana, thanks for the comfort I found in this review, sweetie. I am still a work in progress even at 62 :) lol.
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
Very well written and sorry to say, I have had this happen, I married him anyway and have learned to confront it head on. He has mellowed out with age, but it was tough going for a very long time. He doesn't lie, so much as just loves himself more than he does the rest of us.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Very well written and sorry to say, I have had this happen, I married him anyway and have learned to confront it head on. He has mellowed out with age, but it was tough going for a very long time. He doesn't lie, so much as just loves himself more than he does the rest of us.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Pain in the arse ain't it!!! I am happy for you that he has mellowed. Strong woman you are. xx
Thanks for the caring review hon :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
I have had this very thing happen to me and try as I might the relationship could never be one that was open and honest. Blessings for a good day, Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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I have had this very thing happen to me and try as I might the relationship could never be one that was open and honest. Blessings for a good day, Patricia
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Ty for the review and the honest admission. Blessings, Patricia!
Always,
Missy
Comment from JTStone
Tough, tough poem. That felt like it would have come from you staring into the mirror, with these words pouring worth about your relationship and the one who hurt you.
Strong conviction to end the poem. forgiveness...that is the first part of letting go.
JT
PS, love your Halloween look on your page.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Tough, tough poem. That felt like it would have come from you staring into the mirror, with these words pouring worth about your relationship and the one who hurt you.
Strong conviction to end the poem. forgiveness...that is the first part of letting go.
JT
PS, love your Halloween look on your page.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thanks JT. I got the pic from an app called Imikimi...you can choose a frame and add your pic. I have a few I will be using this month ...here and on FB :)
I wrote this last night, it just flowed out in less than 10 min. So I am just delighted with the great reviews I am seeing. (wink wink)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Linda Engel
AMEN. After awhile you begin to see the signs. Let him go. Just don't make yourself that available to him. He will go find another that will dote on him. There are good guys out there just looking for someone to be good for and with. Don't give up.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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AMEN. After awhile you begin to see the signs. Let him go. Just don't make yourself that available to him. He will go find another that will dote on him. There are good guys out there just looking for someone to be good for and with. Don't give up.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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You are absofrickinlutely right Linda, hon. This was a very valuable life lesson. Painful yes but ....
Always,
Missy
Comment from Domino 2
I'd have extreme difficulty 'forgiving' a REPEATED liar, Missy, though I believe forgiveness to generally be a great thing. By doing so in this case, whether fiction or bio, you prove how strong your love was/still is, but also offer excellent advice to others to 'move on' as soon as possible - often easier said than done, of course.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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I'd have extreme difficulty 'forgiving' a REPEATED liar, Missy, though I believe forgiveness to generally be a great thing. By doing so in this case, whether fiction or bio, you prove how strong your love was/still is, but also offer excellent advice to others to 'move on' as soon as possible - often easier said than done, of course.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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I hear ya, Ray!!! Difficult...painful, but doable :)
Thanks sug for the continued support.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Neonewman
Unfortunately my friend, this has happened to many. Missy, glad you're not alone, no one should be alone with this Burdon. Well crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Unfortunately my friend, this has happened to many. Missy, glad you're not alone, no one should be alone with this Burdon. Well crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Hi, Steve. Thank you for lookin in and leaving this. I so appreciate all the feedback I get for writers such as you :)
Missy
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My pleasure Missy, well deserved.
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My pleasure Missy, well deserved.
