Comment from Brett Matthew West

Good

This would have a hard time flying as a Christian, or Gospel, music song because of the language used in Stanza One. Rework that particular stanza and this would be even better along those lines.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Well that's the way it came out and thanks for your review.
Ricky 1024.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Sorry to hear about the tragedies in your life. My condolences. Don't know if you've put this to music, but if you haven't I sure would try in your place. I don't write music. Still, I can see this as a very ambitious project. Well worth the effort. Superb! Les

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015

Thanks for that Mr. Glasstruth.
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