Have you danced?
His ways are not our ways.86 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Have you danced?", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work carries an important message. It was a privilege to review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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"Have you danced?", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work carries an important message. It was a privilege to review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Duchess for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation for the wonderful support you give me, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a beautiful song lyric, Roy. I wish you had recorded it so we could hear how it goes. I guess if you put in the time signature and chord progression we could figure it out from that. Or, maybe we're not supposed to know.
One small suggestion:
or number (of) grains of sand upon a beach?
Very lovely, my friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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This is a beautiful song lyric, Roy. I wish you had recorded it so we could hear how it goes. I guess if you put in the time signature and chord progression we could figure it out from that. Or, maybe we're not supposed to know.
One small suggestion:
or number (of) grains of sand upon a beach?
Very lovely, my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Gloria, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation for the suggestion, but it would change the whole rhythm of the song, blessings, Roy.
Comment from LIJ Red
I'll bet you had read that passage about taking the wings of the morning and dwelling in the uttermost parts of the sea. Blank verse is a pretty rigid form. I'd call yours free verse. It is descriptive and lyrical, at any rate, an excellent post.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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I'll bet you had read that passage about taking the wings of the morning and dwelling in the uttermost parts of the sea. Blank verse is a pretty rigid form. I'd call yours free verse. It is descriptive and lyrical, at any rate, an excellent post.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Red, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from evilynne
Your message is thought provoking and well written, your descriptive language excellent. The picture is wonderful and your background notes informative and inspiring. Evi
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Your message is thought provoking and well written, your descriptive language excellent. The picture is wonderful and your background notes informative and inspiring. Evi
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Evilynne, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Roy
_ I like this. Very upbeat.
_ I actually kind of sang it instead of reading.
_ You see, I said kind of sing, because even then, without making a single peep---I scare the birds south way before it's time. (*<*)
_ Beautifully penned and expressed, my friend.
_ Take care.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jackie (*;*)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Hi, Roy
_ I like this. Very upbeat.
_ I actually kind of sang it instead of reading.
_ You see, I said kind of sing, because even then, without making a single peep---I scare the birds south way before it's time. (*<*)
_ Beautifully penned and expressed, my friend.
_ Take care.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jackie (*;*)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Jackie, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from angel123
I really enjoyed reading your spiritual poem/song. It flows well with a great message about God and His love for mankind. I'm just really learning about Blank verse and I like the style. The questions you ask in your poem are interesting and thought provoking.
Angel123
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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I really enjoyed reading your spiritual poem/song. It flows well with a great message about God and His love for mankind. I'm just really learning about Blank verse and I like the style. The questions you ask in your poem are interesting and thought provoking.
Angel123
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Angel, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from poetadeu
This is such a beautiful read. I am so glad you brought
to share with FS readers. You were a poet years ago, a born
to be...I could read these all day. Thanks for reminding
the wonderful gifts of God when He calls us...
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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This is such a beautiful read. I am so glad you brought
to share with FS readers. You were a poet years ago, a born
to be...I could read these all day. Thanks for reminding
the wonderful gifts of God when He calls us...
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, how are you going OK? blessings, Roy.
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I am still here aggravating everybody,
so far so good...Thank you, dear one.
Blessings::}}Joyce
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Thanks Joyce
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Much welcome!
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I am still here aggravating everybody,
so far so good...Thank you, dear one.
Blessings::}}Joyce
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My pleasure Joyce
Comment from RGstar
Good usage of natural elements here, Roy, leading up to the conclusion where once again your faith shines through.
Wishing you a good day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Good usage of natural elements here, Roy, leading up to the conclusion where once again your faith shines through.
Wishing you a good day.
RGstar
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks RG, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dean Kuch
In my imagination I have done all of the lovely, mysterious, beautiful things you've written of so well here, Roy. I'd like to think that every single one of us has...at one point and time in our lives. Some have even done so literally.
I would have loved to heard this after it was put to music. I'd wager it was deeply moving (no pun intended in relation to your stunning photo art, Roy). Besides, song lyrics do NOT have to rhyme--not always. And neither does poetry, not when it is written as well as this...
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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In my imagination I have done all of the lovely, mysterious, beautiful things you've written of so well here, Roy. I'd like to think that every single one of us has...at one point and time in our lives. Some have even done so literally.
I would have loved to heard this after it was put to music. I'd wager it was deeply moving (no pun intended in relation to your stunning photo art, Roy). Besides, song lyrics do NOT have to rhyme--not always. And neither does poetry, not when it is written as well as this...
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Dean, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
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It's always a pleasure, Roy. You're more than welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Neonewman
Wow! What a wonderfully crafted song you have delivered Roy, I never new you wrote music. I can only imagine what this piece sounds like to music.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Wow! What a wonderfully crafted song you have delivered Roy, I never new you wrote music. I can only imagine what this piece sounds like to music.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thanks Steve, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, blessings, Roy.
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You are quite welcome!
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You are quite welcome!
