Yes, I Once Loved
minute poem28 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
I thoroughly enjoyed this masterfully crafted piece you have delivered my friend. It is in perfect minute form and simply captivating.
The artwork above is divine.
God bless and good luck in the contest.
Steve
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I thoroughly enjoyed this masterfully crafted piece you have delivered my friend. It is in perfect minute form and simply captivating.
The artwork above is divine.
God bless and good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from l.raven
OH Michael, I sing for that same love....the one you knew was the right one...when you had it all...when you couldn't wait to wake up in the morning...sigh...those were the days my friend...so very well written....a great minute poem...Luff Linda xxoo
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OH Michael, I sing for that same love....the one you knew was the right one...when you had it all...when you couldn't wait to wake up in the morning...sigh...those were the days my friend...so very well written....a great minute poem...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. Every once and awhile, we let true love slip through our fingers. Our live is filled with guilt and sorrow. It teaches us to be more careful when the next chance comes along. Great work.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Every once and awhile, we let true love slip through our fingers. Our live is filled with guilt and sorrow. It teaches us to be more careful when the next chance comes along. Great work.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from Nosha17
Yes, a rhyming poem, wish you would write more of them! Sorry, I don't meant to moan! The wistful longing of a lost love when damsels were fair and knights were bold-I am waxing poetic in my review even. Excellent rhyming and feelings of romance and love. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Yes, a rhyming poem, wish you would write more of them! Sorry, I don't meant to moan! The wistful longing of a lost love when damsels were fair and knights were bold-I am waxing poetic in my review even. Excellent rhyming and feelings of romance and love. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from poetadeu
This is an impressive write...usually it is the
lady who grieves the loss rather than the man.
Seems men have the fortitude to go on with life
without much consideration, only the knowledge
that it was meant to be, attitude! I like the
art and the blue/black font...Best wishes in the
Minute contest!
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This is an impressive write...usually it is the
lady who grieves the loss rather than the man.
Seems men have the fortitude to go on with life
without much consideration, only the knowledge
that it was meant to be, attitude! I like the
art and the blue/black font...Best wishes in the
Minute contest!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from Sasha
Lovely minute poem about lost love. I really like the uplifting tone of this one. Sad to have lost love, but to be able to have a positive memory of it is inspiring. Terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
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Lovely minute poem about lost love. I really like the uplifting tone of this one. Sad to have lost love, but to be able to have a positive memory of it is inspiring. Terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderfully romantic minute poem of love lost and kindly remembered. Maybe if he is lucky, he can repeat it again with someone else now that he seems to be getting over the love and leaving it as a good memory.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a wonderfully romantic minute poem of love lost and kindly remembered. Maybe if he is lucky, he can repeat it again with someone else now that he seems to be getting over the love and leaving it as a good memory.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well done, Mikey. I love the upbeat nature of this compared to so many poems that whine about their lost youth. You're wise enough to know that once you DID have it all. More than most would admit. You realize that nothing lasts forever, and in the end all we can have is our memory. :)
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Well done, Mikey. I love the upbeat nature of this compared to so many poems that whine about their lost youth. You're wise enough to know that once you DID have it all. More than most would admit. You realize that nothing lasts forever, and in the end all we can have is our memory. :)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from justafan
WOW. This is just beautiful. Stunning if you will, in both the picture, background, and font color. Your words leapt off the page and into my heart!! Just amazing, Mikey! Thank you for sharing.
Always justafan,
Missy
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WOW. This is just beautiful. Stunning if you will, in both the picture, background, and font color. Your words leapt off the page and into my heart!! Just amazing, Mikey! Thank you for sharing.
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
Comment from ellie6
A poem of sad realisation. The last line 'I had it all' speaks volumes. Where did love go ? The sad thing is that we don't recognise happiness when we have it, it's only with hindsight that we can appreciate what we once had.
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A poem of sad realisation. The last line 'I had it all' speaks volumes. Where did love go ? The sad thing is that we don't recognise happiness when we have it, it's only with hindsight that we can appreciate what we once had.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
