Little Poems
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Comment from papa55mike
I love this well written fall poem and learned a new form poetry.
The picture is beautiful and we haven't started the change of colors in Tennessee.
Have a great day and God bless, mike.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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I love this well written fall poem and learned a new form poetry.
The picture is beautiful and we haven't started the change of colors in Tennessee.
Have a great day and God bless, mike.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Thank you Mike. Your time will come.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi thinking of Autumn i am myself thrilled. The woods would be of all colours and the soft noise under ones feet, just exhilarating. This is quite a beautiful wring. Full of xhortations,colours and light spirit.
Just great.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Hi thinking of Autumn i am myself thrilled. The woods would be of all colours and the soft noise under ones feet, just exhilarating. This is quite a beautiful wring. Full of xhortations,colours and light spirit.
Just great.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Thank you Benny.
Comment from ravenblack
This is one of my favorites of your fall poems. I can see myself as a kid skipping down that trail. Amaranth as and icarine - so much better than red or yellow, the. Words themselves almost mystic.I hope fall arrives soon. It is still in the 80's here. And I want to jump in a pile of leaves!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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This is one of my favorites of your fall poems. I can see myself as a kid skipping down that trail. Amaranth as and icarine - so much better than red or yellow, the. Words themselves almost mystic.I hope fall arrives soon. It is still in the 80's here. And I want to jump in a pile of leaves!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. I'd love to take that jump too. Coming soon to a field near you.
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One can only hope.
Comment from Selina Stambi
For every bush has turned a blush
from lime to tangerine,
or grasped a hold of marigold,
if not of icterine ... oh, what a visual feast, Tom.
I love the internal rhyme in the first line of each stanza.
WELL DONE (as always!)
Sonali
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015
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For every bush has turned a blush
from lime to tangerine,
or grasped a hold of marigold,
if not of icterine ... oh, what a visual feast, Tom.
I love the internal rhyme in the first line of each stanza.
WELL DONE (as always!)
Sonali
Comment Written 22-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2015
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Thank you Sonali. These are fun to write.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triquatrain poem about the changes that come in fall. I enjoyed reading it and love the picture
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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this is a beautiful write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triquatrain poem about the changes that come in fall. I enjoyed reading it and love the picture
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you sweetwoodjax.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Tom,, this is just beautiful...you can feel the gentle breeze blowing through the trees...and see the beauty of the Autumn...so very nicely written...and your colors and picture...stunning...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Hi Tom,, this is just beautiful...you can feel the gentle breeze blowing through the trees...and see the beauty of the Autumn...so very nicely written...and your colors and picture...stunning...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you Luff Linda. Glad you enjoyed it.
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you are so welcome Yom...xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Amaranth...now there's a word you don't see every day, and that word was used so fittingly here in your well rhymed, rhythmically beautiful poem, Tom. You don't just simply say red, gold, and green. You expound upon the color wheel with "Marigold", Tangerine", and "Lime" (not to mention icterine, which is a color term described as yellowish, jaundice-yellow or marked with yellow).
Simply outstanding, and it's about my favorite season of all, which was a delightful bonus.
Bravo...
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Amaranth...now there's a word you don't see every day, and that word was used so fittingly here in your well rhymed, rhythmically beautiful poem, Tom. You don't just simply say red, gold, and green. You expound upon the color wheel with "Marigold", Tangerine", and "Lime" (not to mention icterine, which is a color term described as yellowish, jaundice-yellow or marked with yellow).
Simply outstanding, and it's about my favorite season of all, which was a delightful bonus.
Bravo...
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you Dean. It was a color education for me too!
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My pleasure, sir. You're more than welcome. :)
Comment from Nosha17
I like this poetic form with the internal rhyme, very effective and flows nicely. You have lovely imagery and descriptions of that Autumn blush and excellent rhyming. Faye
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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I like this poetic form with the internal rhyme, very effective and flows nicely. You have lovely imagery and descriptions of that Autumn blush and excellent rhyming. Faye
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you Faye.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Very well done Tom. I do the same thing in Heptameter resulting in two quatrains or stanzas which ever you want to call then. I love the way it sings don't you? It just makes for a jazzy rhythm and adds emphasis to the rhymes. This is a fun way to do it as well. That is a nice picture. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Very well done Tom. I do the same thing in Heptameter resulting in two quatrains or stanzas which ever you want to call then. I love the way it sings don't you? It just makes for a jazzy rhythm and adds emphasis to the rhymes. This is a fun way to do it as well. That is a nice picture. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you Nancy
Comment from Pantygynt
The autumn or fall brings out the artist in us and would have others scurrying for our dictionaries were it not for your excellent notes, for which thank you. I loved this form with its alternating internal and external rhymes that describe the scene so well.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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The autumn or fall brings out the artist in us and would have others scurrying for our dictionaries were it not for your excellent notes, for which thank you. I loved this form with its alternating internal and external rhymes that describe the scene so well.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt . I considered letting the dictionary scramble occur, but then thought better of it. I appreciate your review and the stars.
