Act of Endurance
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is very creative and different. You have a creative pen and it is shown in this post. I like how you compare science to what is believed in faith. An interesting post.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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This is very creative and different. You have a creative pen and it is shown in this post. I like how you compare science to what is believed in faith. An interesting post.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Coming from you a great compliment, still pits: but learning. Thanking you for generous rate and inspiring thoughts.
Comment from AJGOLD
This is not written to be read on the beach, with an iced rum runner and three layers of protective sun screen.
I found it fascinating and illuminating.
It reads quickly because of the short paragraphs.
Found myself re-reading and not upset by it.
Please continue. I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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This is not written to be read on the beach, with an iced rum runner and three layers of protective sun screen.
I found it fascinating and illuminating.
It reads quickly because of the short paragraphs.
Found myself re-reading and not upset by it.
Please continue. I enjoyed.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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I thank you for your inspiring comments of encouragement: plus generous rate.
Comment from Neonewman
Very well crafted piece you have delivered with an awesome choice in artwork! I have to admit that I had to read it once more to fully understand the intent .
Great job!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Very well crafted piece you have delivered with an awesome choice in artwork! I have to admit that I had to read it once more to fully understand the intent .
Great job!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2016
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Glad this write found interest. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Adri7enne
I think English is not your first language and that's fine. It's a good way to start communicating.
"A reach by you for aid in earnest efforts of helping, service given to be in comforts to you, true in acts for you at saddening times when you really need someone's friendship: never had excuse to you of to do; or said they wouldn't to you come or stay."
You might try: " I reach for you, to offer aid, in an earnest effort to comfort you at this sad time when you need someone's friendship. I won't offer you excuses for why I can't come, or stay with you."
You might try posting shorter posts so your reviewers will be tempted to offer you creative help. I hope this little bit helps.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I think English is not your first language and that's fine. It's a good way to start communicating.
"A reach by you for aid in earnest efforts of helping, service given to be in comforts to you, true in acts for you at saddening times when you really need someone's friendship: never had excuse to you of to do; or said they wouldn't to you come or stay."
You might try: " I reach for you, to offer aid, in an earnest effort to comfort you at this sad time when you need someone's friendship. I won't offer you excuses for why I can't come, or stay with you."
You might try posting shorter posts so your reviewers will be tempted to offer you creative help. I hope this little bit helps.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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You are right I am a Martian, I thank you for your insight and appreciates your given statements. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
Comment from Earthwriter
interesting piece of verse i had to read it through a couple of times to fully understand writers intent excellent job on this piece
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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interesting piece of verse i had to read it through a couple of times to fully understand writers intent excellent job on this piece
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I'm again pleased my work found interests with you. Thanking you for generous rate and inspiring thoughts.
Comment from MaBaker
Wow! I will be honest I didn't understand very much of this poem. I've said before I don't write poetry so I can only judge on what I understand and like. You have a lot to say and this is it. Well written no typos that I saw. Regards MaBaker
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Wow! I will be honest I didn't understand very much of this poem. I've said before I don't write poetry so I can only judge on what I understand and like. You have a lot to say and this is it. Well written no typos that I saw. Regards MaBaker
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Ma don't stop shooting bullets, you do okay in understanding, the problem is me understanding writing poetry, know there are listed styles: thanking you for generous rate and kind hearted conveyances.
Comment from LeithAnne
This is a work standing alone. Its difficult to read, to follow but its worth the intensity to actually read what is being said. Thought provoking. I like this, its deep and you gotta dig, cannot sweep over it. Love to know how this stuff comes to you?
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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This is a work standing alone. Its difficult to read, to follow but its worth the intensity to actually read what is being said. Thought provoking. I like this, its deep and you gotta dig, cannot sweep over it. Love to know how this stuff comes to you?
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Too much soda pop. Mainly drawn from hours of researching my release of freedom from those tasks, glad it was pleasing: thanking you for generous rate and thoughts of encouragements.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Wow. Deep. I have given some thought to what would happen if for some reason, natural or man-made, meds were no longer available. I don't think the riots we see blaring on television every day could even compare. I've been told, but never researched it, that sorcery and pharmaceutical come from the same root word.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Wow. Deep. I have given some thought to what would happen if for some reason, natural or man-made, meds were no longer available. I don't think the riots we see blaring on television every day could even compare. I've been told, but never researched it, that sorcery and pharmaceutical come from the same root word.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Not too much believing in witches brew, but control is the key to governing, supply and demand wiith suckers as takers, good point although about riots, Jesus states let them be sick seek a doctor this statement intent to me is God rules health and well being, then what is science medicine: thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts inspiring.
Comment from TallySally
All riveting. Reads as stream of consciousness. Confusion, delusion, desperation, elation - pain, pleasure. Wow!
Especially poignant for me:
Mystically behind close doors formed from substances, your friend is science created, cloaked in unknown mysteries, not magic, round and white stone in its appearance.
Your friend is a shield on guard for you bright shining, a slayer targeted to conquer your sickening, fighting the vicious blows against your countless lames.
Good job
Relda
And:
My magic stone of science which is "alive" crusading within you brilliant and is taught, being endeared it is around the world, a creation without a brain.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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All riveting. Reads as stream of consciousness. Confusion, delusion, desperation, elation - pain, pleasure. Wow!
Especially poignant for me:
Mystically behind close doors formed from substances, your friend is science created, cloaked in unknown mysteries, not magic, round and white stone in its appearance.
Your friend is a shield on guard for you bright shining, a slayer targeted to conquer your sickening, fighting the vicious blows against your countless lames.
Good job
Relda
And:
My magic stone of science which is "alive" crusading within you brilliant and is taught, being endeared it is around the world, a creation without a brain.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thanking you for your thoughts about this write, still trying to touch inner pleasure. Lots of pits.
Comment from Joyce Long
"My Magic Stone" is a very unusual poem. Your picture is even more unusual. The grapes looking like they are being poured in the head makes a person think. God is the great healer. Isn't it wonderful that he allows science to find and use his wonderful herbs and plants? I've had many surgeries and am thankful there are anaesthesias so I don't know what is happening and I have no pain. "A friend....in pill form." This is a wonderful friend. Everyone relies on medicine to help us to get well or stay well, but God through science gives us the relief we seek. But, it isn't to be over done or misused.
Thank you for this. I didn't see any errors.
Joyce 1-11-15
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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"My Magic Stone" is a very unusual poem. Your picture is even more unusual. The grapes looking like they are being poured in the head makes a person think. God is the great healer. Isn't it wonderful that he allows science to find and use his wonderful herbs and plants? I've had many surgeries and am thankful there are anaesthesias so I don't know what is happening and I have no pain. "A friend....in pill form." This is a wonderful friend. Everyone relies on medicine to help us to get well or stay well, but God through science gives us the relief we seek. But, it isn't to be over done or misused.
Thank you for this. I didn't see any errors.
Joyce 1-11-15
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Glad some delight was found in your read. My problem not so much the plants given but the loss of those who discovered their usage. Being too dependent on science rather than ourselves. Too generous rate with very pleasing comment.
