A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "I See You Now"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from padumachitta
Hi...this is a well written poem, it flows well and bring to full circle the problem with social media. It is very easy for lonely women, people really, to get taken in by con people.
I wish those who need to hear this could read these words of yours.
paudmachitta
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Hi...this is a well written poem, it flows well and bring to full circle the problem with social media. It is very easy for lonely women, people really, to get taken in by con people.
I wish those who need to hear this could read these words of yours.
paudmachitta
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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EXACTLY P. I wish at times I could scream it!!!
Thank you, sweetie for seeing and feeling my words.
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
I wanted to give you six stars for this Missy, but I'm all out. Sorry :(
I love the beautiful picture you posted with this. It really caught my eye and couldn't wait to see what you wrote.
I do love the poem. It sends a message to all the men that use women and throw them away. This has been done to me, too. But I have a message to all those men out there that do that ... you reap what you sow. :)
You put a lot of feeling and emotion into this. I could feel the pain coming from your words. Fantastic job!
Shana :)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I wanted to give you six stars for this Missy, but I'm all out. Sorry :(
I love the beautiful picture you posted with this. It really caught my eye and couldn't wait to see what you wrote.
I do love the poem. It sends a message to all the men that use women and throw them away. This has been done to me, too. But I have a message to all those men out there that do that ... you reap what you sow. :)
You put a lot of feeling and emotion into this. I could feel the pain coming from your words. Fantastic job!
Shana :)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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This came to me while waiting for my coffee to make this morning. When I started to write it just flowed. And you are absolutely right about the pain and emotion. Thanks for seeing that and leaving me this very special review. I will gladly accept the virtual 6er :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
You are so right, with online dating is a big gamble and a lot of men are just looking for quick sex. I like your free verse poem. It is easy to understand and with a good message. Good job!
~gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Hello :)
You are so right, with online dating is a big gamble and a lot of men are just looking for quick sex. I like your free verse poem. It is easy to understand and with a good message. Good job!
~gypsy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Gypsy, good morning hon. Thanks for this review and your insight to what I was saying. Blessings xx
Always,
Missy
Comment from Neonewman
This happened to my niece and her 3 kiddo's. He came in all of our lives for just over 2 years and seemed absolutely perfect. Then he told her he never loved her or the kids and simply left. Horrible thing to do! Loved this wonderfully crafted piece my friend.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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This happened to my niece and her 3 kiddo's. He came in all of our lives for just over 2 years and seemed absolutely perfect. Then he told her he never loved her or the kids and simply left. Horrible thing to do! Loved this wonderfully crafted piece my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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How horrible!!! Do we really EVER know someone?
Thank you, Steve, for this insight into the reality of my poem.
Always,
Missy XX
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No we don't! You are welcome and as usual I send Blessings.
Steve
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No we don't! You are welcome and as usual I send Blessings.
Steve
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem
Well written with a strong message
They use the new media, the trolls,
but it has sadly been going on for centuries
in one form or another
Retribution would be nice, but better yet
to catch them in the beginning
and prevent the heartache and pain
They are abusers and should be labeled as such
A new use for a scarlet "A"
Excellent art work
to match the excellent poem
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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This is an excellent poem
Well written with a strong message
They use the new media, the trolls,
but it has sadly been going on for centuries
in one form or another
Retribution would be nice, but better yet
to catch them in the beginning
and prevent the heartache and pain
They are abusers and should be labeled as such
A new use for a scarlet "A"
Excellent art work
to match the excellent poem
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review RS. I did just what this poem eludes to in the end to a scoundrel such as this. He was playing several of my friends and we talked...So, I played his game and bested him.
Always,
Missy
Never mess with a scorned woman...lol
Comment from Ben Colder
I am not a woman, but I see several on Facebook who can concur with this poem. I find nothing wrong in the way it is written.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I am not a woman, but I see several on Facebook who can concur with this poem. I find nothing wrong in the way it is written.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Smilin Ben...I can see that you are not a woman.
Thank you for this review, my friend. For seeing some truth in it.
Always,
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
This is well stated and so true. I see men who do the same trying to lure a woman into their snare. I have a F/B account and quite often get request from me. I have found when I talk straight about my faith, they leave me alone.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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This is well stated and so true. I see men who do the same trying to lure a woman into their snare. I have a F/B account and quite often get request from me. I have found when I talk straight about my faith, they leave me alone.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Hi Patricia, I am glad to see you back and posting. I missed you.
Thanks for understanding this and the positive feedback. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Nosha17
I can quite believe that, scumbags! I don't usually use such language but it troubles me that men (maybe women too,) are deceiving other unsuspecting souls this way. I would never trust anyone online, it is ok with our poetry contacts, that is different. I feel bad that you were hurt this way. Well expressed views and an excellent message for others to heed. I haven't seen you reviewing my poetry late, perhaps you would like it, Faye
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I can quite believe that, scumbags! I don't usually use such language but it troubles me that men (maybe women too,) are deceiving other unsuspecting souls this way. I would never trust anyone online, it is ok with our poetry contacts, that is different. I feel bad that you were hurt this way. Well expressed views and an excellent message for others to heed. I haven't seen you reviewing my poetry late, perhaps you would like it, Faye
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I apologize first for my lagging in reviewing your splendid work hon. I went straight away and left one on one of your works.
Thank you for seeing this for what it is. A warning and a lesson.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Domino 2
I'm sure women AS WELL as men have been mislead and conned by on-line relationships, Missy.
I would never offer one nor accept one, seriously, unless I'd actually met the person face to face, as words on a keyboard can be manipulative and misunderstood.
However, I'm not decrying the potential of such relationships, as I know many have been successful, thank goodness.
with the upmost respect, I think your free verse would present better and be more dramatic, offered in shorter random length lines, and random short stanzas, rather than its current single line statements.
I reckon the substance is all there, however.
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ray xx
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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I'm sure women AS WELL as men have been mislead and conned by on-line relationships, Missy.
I would never offer one nor accept one, seriously, unless I'd actually met the person face to face, as words on a keyboard can be manipulative and misunderstood.
However, I'm not decrying the potential of such relationships, as I know many have been successful, thank goodness.
with the upmost respect, I think your free verse would present better and be more dramatic, offered in shorter random length lines, and random short stanzas, rather than its current single line statements.
I reckon the substance is all there, however.
Nice one!
Best wishes, Ray xx
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Thanks Ray for the review of my work. I will look into revamping the format.
Always,
Missy
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I absolutely loved this poem. It is so on target. There are so many guys and gals who are exactly as you describe in your poem. I think I was guilty of doing that to a guy at one point in my life. Good work
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Excellent. I absolutely loved this poem. It is so on target. There are so many guys and gals who are exactly as you describe in your poem. I think I was guilty of doing that to a guy at one point in my life. Good work
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Many thanks, PBB, I was worried about putting this out there. But, I am glad I did. Your review told me I was right to do so :)
Always,
Missy
