Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 297 "The Back Door"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Another interesting form of poem. I never see a back door as an important feature like you describe here. It is an attractive back door and an excellent photo.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Another interesting form of poem. I never see a back door as an important feature like you describe here. It is an attractive back door and an excellent photo.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Shank you Sandra.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your back door and backyard garden are lovely. this is a nice form to use - nice a simply put. A pleasure to read.
~teress~
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Your back door and backyard garden are lovely. this is a nice form to use - nice a simply put. A pleasure to read.
~teress~
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you teresa
Comment from I am Cat
Hello Tom,
Is this the same brother with the fabulous backyard?
This one looks lovely...
A fun poem with a link between stanzas...
It makes me look for the family pet...
and want to knock on the back door and invite myself
to the BBQ ;)
Well done
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Hello Tom,
Is this the same brother with the fabulous backyard?
This one looks lovely...
A fun poem with a link between stanzas...
It makes me look for the family pet...
and want to knock on the back door and invite myself
to the BBQ ;)
Well done
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Cat. Yup, the same back yard will the ponds.
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Nice!
Comment from poetadeu
This is the first time I have had the opportunity to
read this form. You have chosen an, everyday,
subject, added a beautiful picture, perfect and
elaborated on the subject, door, in a simple and
beautiful way. I love the everything about this and
enjoyed my read. Thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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This is the first time I have had the opportunity to
read this form. You have chosen an, everyday,
subject, added a beautiful picture, perfect and
elaborated on the subject, door, in a simple and
beautiful way. I love the everything about this and
enjoyed my read. Thank you.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joyce, it was a fun write.
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You are someone that shows others
how to meet a challenge by being
attentive to example. That is how I
learned the bit that I know about
poetic expression. I am not born to
write poetry, obviously. But, I love
trying...Have a blessed night!
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You are someone that shows others
how to meet a challenge by being
attentive to example. That is how I
learned the bit that I know about
poetic expression. I am not born to
write poetry, obviously. But, I love
trying...Have a blessed night!
Comment from SilentNinja2930
Good job. This poem really conveys how much you love your backyard. The reader can see that family, home, and friends are important to you. The reader can also see that your backyard gives you respite from the day to day stresses of life. ~Ninja
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Good job. This poem really conveys how much you love your backyard. The reader can see that family, home, and friends are important to you. The reader can also see that your backyard gives you respite from the day to day stresses of life. ~Ninja
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Ninja.
Comment from rspoet
I like your Puente poem very much
It creates an interesting effect
with two different aspects of the same scene
connected by a bridge of words
You've done it very well
in this free verse with several rhymes
The bridge both opens and connects
I'm happy to learn of this form
which I had not previously seen
Well done
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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I like your Puente poem very much
It creates an interesting effect
with two different aspects of the same scene
connected by a bridge of words
You've done it very well
in this free verse with several rhymes
The bridge both opens and connects
I'm happy to learn of this form
which I had not previously seen
Well done
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you RS Poet.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a nice back Yard Tom. It is a private place to enjoy in his own little world. It seems you have followed the form with flair and told yourstory well. Good job.:<) Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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What a nice back Yard Tom. It is a private place to enjoy in his own little world. It seems you have followed the form with flair and told yourstory well. Good job.:<) Nancy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Nancy.
Comment from Nosha17
It is nice to have a nice back door area or patio where you can extend your living space and have BBQs. Well chosen words and rhyme. Lovely picture and enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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It is nice to have a nice back door area or patio where you can extend your living space and have BBQs. Well chosen words and rhyme. Lovely picture and enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you Faye.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this puenta poem, kind of a longer version of a sedoka poem, I will have to bookmark this and try to write one myself. is there a set line limit or is that at the discretion of the writer?
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this puenta poem, kind of a longer version of a sedoka poem, I will have to bookmark this and try to write one myself. is there a set line limit or is that at the discretion of the writer?
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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The line limit is at the descretion of the poet, but both stanzas must have the sane number of lines.
