In Her Lair
Kyrielle Sonnet33 total reviews
Comment from May 1
I love the tempo of this one and the fact that it is about a dragon. Also, I really like the rhymes, they flow very nicely. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I love the tempo of this one and the fact that it is about a dragon. Also, I really like the rhymes, they flow very nicely. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Hi May 1,
I am happy you liked this one. It is one of my favorites, but then I have a soft spot for dragons. I have an entire collection of ceramic dragons. Love 'em!
Debi
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Yeah, I love dragons, too so it was really fun to read.
Comment from Domino 2
Wow, Debi, you convey the immense power and apparently insurmountable position of this Dragon Queen. I think I'd let her be, however powerful a 'Knight' I was.
Impeccable rhymes and meter throughout.
Top write!
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Wow, Debi, you convey the immense power and apparently insurmountable position of this Dragon Queen. I think I'd let her be, however powerful a 'Knight' I was.
Impeccable rhymes and meter throughout.
Top write!
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the great review, Ray. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read, especially since this is not promoted at the moment. Watch out for the dragon.
Comment from write hand blue
The dragon Queen, effective presentation with an appropriate stylised picture.
Married to poetry of high quality equals an atmospheric read.
I like this work, the complex rules work in this case.
:) Mel.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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The dragon Queen, effective presentation with an appropriate stylised picture.
Married to poetry of high quality equals an atmospheric read.
I like this work, the complex rules work in this case.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Mel,
Thank you for the encouraging comments. I like that you found this to be an "atmospheric read." I was hoping to create a threatening mood.
Debi
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Yes a threatening, atmospheric read with depth. I write too quickly at times...Mel.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Debi, This was such a joy to read. The meter is perfect and you chose extraordinary words to produce vivid images. After reading your notes, I see a lot of effort went into this. I'm not a poet, but I know what I enjoy reading and this piece was definitely enjoyable. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Debi, This was such a joy to read. The meter is perfect and you chose extraordinary words to produce vivid images. After reading your notes, I see a lot of effort went into this. I'm not a poet, but I know what I enjoy reading and this piece was definitely enjoyable. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Lou,
I am flattered that you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate the encouraging comments about the vivid images , the meter and the word choices. Thank you for stopping by to read and review.
Debi
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hello from Taos, New Mexico. Sorry I'm late getting to this Debi. I've never written a Kyrielle Sonnet so I can't speak to the form--although it looks mighty fine to me. I love its theme, however, and the great little story you tell! Great job, my friend.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hello from Taos, New Mexico. Sorry I'm late getting to this Debi. I've never written a Kyrielle Sonnet so I can't speak to the form--although it looks mighty fine to me. I love its theme, however, and the great little story you tell! Great job, my friend.
:) Bev
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Bev,
Thank you again for the wonderful galaxy of stars. I am pleased that you liked the theme and the story. I'm not certain why, but I do like dragons.
Debi
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You're very welcome, Debi. :) Bev
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi, Rebekka,
Hey, I appreciated this great little story in a poem.
Of course, it might help that I enjoy the theme of dragons and have no problem imagining the setting:)
Still, you spin the spell and visions swell within the open mind. And cautious knights concerned with life might find this prey unkind!
A fun read...love your styling!
Hope all is well,
Bill
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi, Rebekka,
Hey, I appreciated this great little story in a poem.
Of course, it might help that I enjoy the theme of dragons and have no problem imagining the setting:)
Still, you spin the spell and visions swell within the open mind. And cautious knights concerned with life might find this prey unkind!
A fun read...love your styling!
Hope all is well,
Bill
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Bill,
I am happy to hear you liked the story and found it fun to write. I just find dragons fascinating for some reason. Thank you for the comment about the styling and how it created visions in your mind. High praise. Thank you!
Debi
Comment from MacMhuirich
I enjoyed your poem very much. The form is wonderful, don't think I've read a Kyrielle Sonnet before. The flow and imagery are nice. Oh, I do like tales about dragons.
God Bless
John
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed your poem very much. The form is wonderful, don't think I've read a Kyrielle Sonnet before. The flow and imagery are nice. Oh, I do like tales about dragons.
God Bless
John
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi John,
I have to agree with you, I like tales involving dragons, too. I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for the excellent review and stars.
Debi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
I love this fantasy Kyrielle Sonnet. 'The dragon queen is in her lair' what an awesome line! I can imagine the dragon waiting for the enemy.... 'bring it on!' LOL Great poem, I enjoyed it. Beautiful art work.
~gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hello :)
I love this fantasy Kyrielle Sonnet. 'The dragon queen is in her lair' what an awesome line! I can imagine the dragon waiting for the enemy.... 'bring it on!' LOL Great poem, I enjoyed it. Beautiful art work.
~gypsy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Hi Gypsy,
Yeah, 'bring it on!" I am happy to hear you liked the refrain line and could imagine the dragon queen waiting for her enemy. I am happy you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for then encouraging review. I appreciate you stopping by.
Debi
Comment from RGstar
A very well done.Lyrical and strong in form. I would not have known of such constructions until reading your notes.
Well done.
My best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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A very well done.Lyrical and strong in form. I would not have known of such constructions until reading your notes.
Well done.
My best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate the comments about the poem being lyrical and strong in form. I am pleased you enjoyed it.
Comment from amada
Your lovely work here has movement and passion. A very lovely combination. I am not familiar with the style but its sounds lovely. My fave "Oh, let them come if they so dare/The dragon queen is in her lair." Wow!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Your lovely work here has movement and passion. A very lovely combination. I am not familiar with the style but its sounds lovely. My fave "Oh, let them come if they so dare/The dragon queen is in her lair." Wow!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate the kind words about the writing and you taking time to point out what you like. What are your suggestions for improving this piece?
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Moi, improving this piece?
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I ask because the reviewing guideline state four stars indicate some revision is needed. I am open to suggestions and ideas. I just wondered how or what ideas you might have. Nothing is perfect and I mean to improve.
It's okay if don't have any suggestions, I just wondered.
