Chasing of the Wind.
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Comment from Writeronboard
I enjoyed reading this and I'd like to read more of your book. There is so much in the world that will make us question our faith but if we trust in God, He will keep us on the right path.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed reading this and I'd like to read more of your book. There is so much in the world that will make us question our faith but if we trust in God, He will keep us on the right path.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Thanks for your kind review. I have just about completed this novel. Please visit my profile and find the remaining chapters. Your remarks are like my own thoughts. So much we have made to separate humanity from each other ignoring the very messages upon which religions are created. Just don't know what to believe in. Best regards.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter did an excellent job of getting us inside Francis's head. There were small things I saw like paragraphs taht I thought could be broken down more. But very minor. The story itself was excellent. And you have a strong character here that can support a book. Great job.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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This chapter did an excellent job of getting us inside Francis's head. There were small things I saw like paragraphs taht I thought could be broken down more. But very minor. The story itself was excellent. And you have a strong character here that can support a book. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I will revisit the chapter and see if I can make smaller paragraph. The story is the part of my novel, Chasing of the Wind. I hope you will read the remaining chapters also. Last chapter will be completed in a day or so. Best regards.
