Love Victorious
5-7-5 Contest17 total reviews
Comment from ellie6
What a lovely poem. you have said a tremendous amount in just a few words. The illustration fits perfectly and you have chosen a powerful font and background colour.
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What a lovely poem. you have said a tremendous amount in just a few words. The illustration fits perfectly and you have chosen a powerful font and background colour.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from lancellot
Yes, this does happen at times. A person is sad and full of sorrow until that person comes along and adds love to their lives. Not sure if the sorrow is really gone, but just suppressed. Good work.
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Yes, this does happen at times. A person is sad and full of sorrow until that person comes along and adds love to their lives. Not sure if the sorrow is really gone, but just suppressed. Good work.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from Nosha17
They say that love conquers all-even all those tears. Most expressive words, capturing the power of love. Great pic and good luck in the contest. faye
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They say that love conquers all-even all those tears. Most expressive words, capturing the power of love. Great pic and good luck in the contest. faye
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from justafan
This is a side of you I have not seen before. I kinda like it Mikey :)
But then, I like all you do!
This is a contest entry, I will be watching for.
Missy
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This is a side of you I have not seen before. I kinda like it Mikey :)
But then, I like all you do!
This is a contest entry, I will be watching for.
Missy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Beeeeyooootiful, Mikey, both in words and presentation. I love how you show the effect of her kiss... with tears becoming stars! You sure do have a way with words. :)
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Beeeeyooootiful, Mikey, both in words and presentation. I love how you show the effect of her kiss... with tears becoming stars! You sure do have a way with words. :)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah, such a romantic you are, Mikey. What a lovely tribute to your wife. I hope you show her all these beautiful poems you write for her. Ha. You likely drive her crazy with them. I'm so jealous, but in a good way. :-)
Nicely done, my friend. It makes me feel good to read this. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Ah, such a romantic you are, Mikey. What a lovely tribute to your wife. I hope you show her all these beautiful poems you write for her. Ha. You likely drive her crazy with them. I'm so jealous, but in a good way. :-)
Nicely done, my friend. It makes me feel good to read this. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from rama devi
Wonderfully expressive, my friend. Love the closing line--very satori-esque in the AHA factor. I like the ironic eloquence of the first two lines, too. Obliterates is such a potent word. MY GRIM FOE is hilariously olde English style, giving a satirical twist in the tone. Enjoyed the artistic presentation as well.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
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Wonderfully expressive, my friend. Love the closing line--very satori-esque in the AHA factor. I like the ironic eloquence of the first two lines, too. Obliterates is such a potent word. MY GRIM FOE is hilariously olde English style, giving a satirical twist in the tone. Enjoyed the artistic presentation as well.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
