Comment from angel123

Excellent

I love your nice poem about the beauty of life coming into the world. New birth should be celebrated with a win right! Good alliteration of born baby and greatest gift.

Angel123

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015

Thank you Angel123 for your lovely review and comments. Yes nothing better than a newborn baby so much joy associated with their birth. Cheers and thanks for reading this entry

Comment from pierre poote'

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. You said a lot in a few words. Children are by far the greatest gift God gives to us. The years with them are the most wonderful years we have.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you pierre poote' for you great review and comments for my poem and yes children make our lives rich and so much fun. I am now also enjoying my grandchildren . So pleased you enjoyed this Cheers

Comment from LeslieP5

Exceptional

This is an excellent entry for the contest - you can't get much better than nature's gift. Pink type goes with he poem but is hard to read . I suggest you make the type larger and or bold. for a better presentation. goodluck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you LeslieP5 for your awesome review and rating for this entry . And I will try to fix up the pink colour. I use my I pad for most of my posts and a bit limited with the font size etc but will see if I can make it a bit darker. Really appreciate you great feedback and helpful suggestions.with Cheers

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)
Good job with your syllable count for this 5/7/5 poem. The theme is endearing and the picture complements the poem. Well done.
~gypsy

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Hi Gypsy and thanks for reading this poem and for your lovely comments. Glad it made the grade. With Cheers

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Exceptional

Good morning to you poet friend. What a beautiful poem, my best to you in your work. Thank you for using my artwork, I am honored. Loyd

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you Loyd for a lovely image. I had this in my mind for sometime and hoped there would be an image of a newborn crying and was very pleased to see your picture so I had to use it , so appreciate your work once again. With cheers and thanks for your lovely review and rating. poet friend

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 09-Sep-2015

You are very welcome. Might I ask when you have few extra moments to take a look at some of my written works here on Fanstory.com.
Thanks, Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem about the birth of a new baby. The joy is second to none. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

With many thanks Mary for stopping by to have a read and review my poem and yes there is no better joy than a new babe. With appreciation of you best of luck wishes too Cheers

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

A poem that will pull at any parents' heart strings. The joy of a new born baby and the relief of its cries. Well done for picking a subject that can be related to by many. Nature's greatest gift. Thank you for sharing and Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you PoemsOfDD for taking the time to read and review my poem your lovely comments are so nice. Thanks for the good luck wishes too Cheers

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you PoemsOfDD for taking the time to read and review my poem your lovely comments are so nice. Thanks for the good luck wishes too Cheers

Comment from JCarriger

Excellent

Well done and a wonderful example of a Nature's gift. This poem was an excellent example of the art of 5-7-5 It was whole, picture perfect in words, and a paragraph of thought.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you so much JCarriger for you time to read and review this poem. I have had this in mind for a while and thought this a perfect opportunity to use it . With Cheers

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you so much JCarriger for you time to read and review this poem. I have had this in mind for a while and thought this a perfect opportunity to use it . With Cheers

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very appropriate photo for your poem.
-You have met the requirements for the prompt.
-The first line introduces the wonderful subject of a newborn baby.
-The second line follows well because the parents are also crying with 'tears of joy'.
-The last line is very good because the newborn is "Nature's greatest gift". This is nicely emphasized with the alliteration.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you respa1 for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest, your detailed review is much appreciated Cheers

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Thank you respa1 for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest, your detailed review is much appreciated Cheers

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Sep-2015

You are very welcome.

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

Beautiful 5-7-5 about the birth of a baby. The baby cries and the parents cry tears of joy as well at the arrival of God's amazing gift. Best to you in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015

Thank you Anabella for your lovely review and comments and best wishes, much appreciated