Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a great poem to reflection, as it was intended. My favorite line "Making the most of the moment makes a masterpiece..." great cadence and sound, just like a prayer. Yes, I need a prayer.

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thank you Amanda for taking the time to review my poem and let me know what you liked the most.
With kindsns.

Gb

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

What more is there to be desired than life in happiness,
The World is still around you, but your spirit is clear and fresh.
Don't let this blessed moment pass your way, My dear,
for there are wondrous riches in the silence of a prayer!
This is my favorite verse...silence of prayer is how I start my day today
God bless

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 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015

Thank you so much kiwijenny for taking the time to rewiew my poem, it was great to hear you liked it,

With kindness,

Gb