Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Turn The Lights Down Low"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
27 total reviews
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Gee! What a spontaneous expression of your great heart and joy. It is so palpable and warm. Although I'm not quite sure I understand the he, she reference toward the end. Congratulations, another fine writing! Blessings, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Gee! What a spontaneous expression of your great heart and joy. It is so palpable and warm. Although I'm not quite sure I understand the he, she reference toward the end. Congratulations, another fine writing! Blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Appreciate your comments and support.
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Blessings to you Brett*&*
Comment from dmt1967
This poem paints a nice scene and I like the fact there is no picture. I really like the rich blue background and the way the words are written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This poem paints a nice scene and I like the fact there is no picture. I really like the rich blue background and the way the words are written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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No picture? What is the bedroom scene attached to it then? Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Your comments and support always appreciated.
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Then it didn't download my friend as I didn't see it.
Comment from Nosha17
Sometimes secret affairs are carried on behind closed doors, to protect their secret. Well expressed feelings of longing and love, good use of rhyming. Most enjoyable, good luck in the contest. faye
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Sometimes secret affairs are carried on behind closed doors, to protect their secret. Well expressed feelings of longing and love, good use of rhyming. Most enjoyable, good luck in the contest. faye
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little lyric of mine. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah nice and sweet, author. Reads like song lyrics with a beautiful setting that goes wonderfully well with the country bedroom.
Sweet surrender and yes love can be found behind a bedroom door.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Ah nice and sweet, author. Reads like song lyrics with a beautiful setting that goes wonderfully well with the country bedroom.
Sweet surrender and yes love can be found behind a bedroom door.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these Country lyrics.
Comment from kiwijenny
Of course love can be found behind a bedroom doo
Sheesh that's so much better than a Stoney path outside...or on a footpath
It's what built civilization that insistance for a bedroom door..
God bless
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Of course love can be found behind a bedroom doo
Sheesh that's so much better than a Stoney path outside...or on a footpath
It's what built civilization that insistance for a bedroom door..
God bless
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello mystery writer,
I don't get the meaning of finding love behind the door from the poem. You didn't write it in the poem and without your author notes no one would know.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Hello mystery writer,
I don't get the meaning of finding love behind the door from the poem. You didn't write it in the poem and without your author notes no one would know.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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I wrote "close the bedroom door" in two different lines of this poem, so your comment about not writing it in the poem is certainly questionable to me? Could you explain your comment about that?
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I just didn't find the sentence of 'what is behind the door' like the contest said.
You have 'slowly close the door'. Maybe I misunderstood. I gave you 5 stars, what you should get because the poem was well written.
Comment from godlucifer
love is a romance with a sensual touch. sensual or worthy of ourselves we touch each other tenderline for the love affect. affection is a sensual worthy of love that we can't pass as we find ourselves in each others arm. your poem is sexy to its notes as the verses rhyme initially. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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love is a romance with a sensual touch. sensual or worthy of ourselves we touch each other tenderline for the love affect. affection is a sensual worthy of love that we can't pass as we find ourselves in each others arm. your poem is sexy to its notes as the verses rhyme initially. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Where do you get "your so vein" in my poem?
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hello brett matthew west,how are you doing today! "your so vein" is not point directly at your poem. this is how i initial my name,for instance people write "yours truly" or "your friend." sorry for the misunderstanding.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Judy Couch
This poem rhymes nicely. It has good rhythm. It's kind of mysterious. I wasn't sure throughout most of it whether it was written from the point of view of the woman or of the man.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This poem rhymes nicely. It has good rhythm. It's kind of mysterious. I wasn't sure throughout most of it whether it was written from the point of view of the woman or of the man.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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The woman. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem leans towards the backdoor man scenario and we seem to hear from both the guy and the girl. It's a bit confusing as you apparently change from one speaker to another. If people getting it on is wrong, we don't wanna be right.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This poem leans towards the backdoor man scenario and we seem to hear from both the guy and the girl. It's a bit confusing as you apparently change from one speaker to another. If people getting it on is wrong, we don't wanna be right.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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It is actually a Duet. Glad you enjoyed this one. Like the Barbara Mandrell-like quote.
Comment from Unspoken94
I am partial to free style and your construction of this couple is beautifully crafted. I may be in the minority but you have my vote.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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I am partial to free style and your construction of this couple is beautifully crafted. I may be in the minority but you have my vote.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thanks. Appreciate your comments and support.
