Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "In Persecution."Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
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Comment from Chellybelle
This is such an interesting topic, and tricky one at best. You have a way of getting your point across and telling a story that is not only interesting but also very relevant in our society today. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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This is such an interesting topic, and tricky one at best. You have a way of getting your point across and telling a story that is not only interesting but also very relevant in our society today. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I appreciate your comment very much. I hope you will read the novel Best regards.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I especially liked the second half. Great use of dialogue. I think this would be stronger if you included a little more internal thought especially in the first half. But a well written and enjoyable read. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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I thought this was well written. I especially liked the second half. Great use of dialogue. I think this would be stronger if you included a little more internal thought especially in the first half. But a well written and enjoyable read. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your very useful remarks. I will revisit the work and hope will be able to improve. Please read all chapters if you can. Best regards.
