Age becomes me.
I'm content.120 total reviews
Comment from ProSongwriter
HI Roy ...
You and your magic pen have done it again! I enjoy how you profess your faith and it's driving force in your life ... yet you are not preachy. Your gentleness and sincerity are so much more invigorating than that hyped-up guy on TV in a $2,000.00 Armani suit and odd hair begging for money.
You bring hone the message in a way that transcends such indignity and leaves us with that which is most important ... a demonstration of real-life faith and the true rewards it brings.
Another masterpiece! Where's a "sixer" when I need one? God Bless ...
Alan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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HI Roy ...
You and your magic pen have done it again! I enjoy how you profess your faith and it's driving force in your life ... yet you are not preachy. Your gentleness and sincerity are so much more invigorating than that hyped-up guy on TV in a $2,000.00 Armani suit and odd hair begging for money.
You bring hone the message in a way that transcends such indignity and leaves us with that which is most important ... a demonstration of real-life faith and the true rewards it brings.
Another masterpiece! Where's a "sixer" when I need one? God Bless ...
Alan
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Your approval is enough Alan, thanks once again for the lovely words and review, blessings, Roy.
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Thanks, Roy, Almost everything you write is a "sixer". Best to you & Elaine. God Bless ...
Alan & Di
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Thank you Alan encouraging
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You are welcome ... the truth speaks for itself.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"To gain this world but lose my soul..." - so true! Sadly, so easy to do, too, I think, with all the temptation of worldly things...your poetry is always so inspiring, my friend, and so very beautiful!
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"To gain this world but lose my soul..." - so true! Sadly, so easy to do, too, I think, with all the temptation of worldly things...your poetry is always so inspiring, my friend, and so very beautiful!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Dawn, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
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Oh, no worries, my friend - I've been away a lot too, and as for keeping up with replies? I've given up!
You're very welcome - always a pleasure. :)
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Thank you Dawn,
Comment from nomi338
Considering the fact that it is easier for a camel to squeeze through the eye of a needle than it is for a rich man to enter into the Kingdom of God. Why because that came would be the only thing trying to enter the eye of that needle. A rich man would be trying to drage his houses, his cars, all his possessions and all his false friends into the kingdom and there is no room for them there. LOL. Wonderfully uplifting poem my friend.
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Considering the fact that it is easier for a camel to squeeze through the eye of a needle than it is for a rich man to enter into the Kingdom of God. Why because that came would be the only thing trying to enter the eye of that needle. A rich man would be trying to drage his houses, his cars, all his possessions and all his false friends into the kingdom and there is no room for them there. LOL. Wonderfully uplifting poem my friend.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from livelylinda
This poem is beautiful, Roy. Perfect in its rhyme and rhythm and its message clear and a good reminder to us all. Well done; an enjoyable read. Linda
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This poem is beautiful, Roy. Perfect in its rhyme and rhythm and its message clear and a good reminder to us all. Well done; an enjoyable read. Linda
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Linda, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Nice rendition here. Shedding oneself of what is one can see which is a crave for worldly things; and taken a decision to forego the unprofitable things and pursue the heavenly things with its glorious gains which are more enduring. I love the way you sequenced this poem from one stanza to the other. I love stanza four the most.
ola thomas
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Nice rendition here. Shedding oneself of what is one can see which is a crave for worldly things; and taken a decision to forego the unprofitable things and pursue the heavenly things with its glorious gains which are more enduring. I love the way you sequenced this poem from one stanza to the other. I love stanza four the most.
ola thomas
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Ola, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Aussie
Great lesson within you poem. We have all stumbled and fallen in our youth, learnt from our mistakes (hopefully.) Some continue to make mistakes because they don't listen to the still, small voice within. Well done.
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Great lesson within you poem. We have all stumbled and fallen in our youth, learnt from our mistakes (hopefully.) Some continue to make mistakes because they don't listen to the still, small voice within. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Kay, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MissMerri
True words, neatly arranged in fine meter and rhyme. There were several lines in this wise poem that stood out for me:
"My eyes grow dim; not so my sight" is especially meaningful and deep, as well as, "Within my heart my hope's content." And I thought the last line was the perfect ending for this philosophical/spiritual poem: "It's only love that makes one whole." That is the ultimate answer, the supreme ending. I really enjoyed this poem, though I wondered why there was so little punctuation. I think you might consider a bit more here and there, for ease of understanding. But I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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True words, neatly arranged in fine meter and rhyme. There were several lines in this wise poem that stood out for me:
"My eyes grow dim; not so my sight" is especially meaningful and deep, as well as, "Within my heart my hope's content." And I thought the last line was the perfect ending for this philosophical/spiritual poem: "It's only love that makes one whole." That is the ultimate answer, the supreme ending. I really enjoyed this poem, though I wondered why there was so little punctuation. I think you might consider a bit more here and there, for ease of understanding. But I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Adonna, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi Royowen, an encouraging and uplifting write. I loved the celestial river, so deep the flow." This was an enchanting write as allows the reader to appreciate what they have. Cheers.
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Hi Royowen, an encouraging and uplifting write. I loved the celestial river, so deep the flow." This was an enchanting write as allows the reader to appreciate what they have. Cheers.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Benjamin, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from GWinterwin
Oh yes I love your message in this poem my friend. Looking at life both good and bad, and realizing the walk of life is so much better with God there.
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Oh yes I love your message in this poem my friend. Looking at life both good and bad, and realizing the walk of life is so much better with God there.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the wonderful review, great comments and exceptional rating, most appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Tessa Kay
Nice sentiments, well woven through your poem. I wouldn't like to be 20 again, either. But have my 20y old body with my present mind and past experiences, that wouldn't be so bad at all. :) Have a great weekend.
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Nice sentiments, well woven through your poem. I wouldn't like to be 20 again, either. But have my 20y old body with my present mind and past experiences, that wouldn't be so bad at all. :) Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much, for this marvellous review and very kind comments, I've been away for a week, sorry for the lateness, also the excellent rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
