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Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
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Comment from
Brett Matthew West
Sounds like many of them end up doing. Can not reconcile between what is right and their own sexuality. Well written story.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
Thanks for your encouraging comments. Hope you will read the novel.
Comment from
lancellot
I'm not church going person but this is an interesting chapter even to me. But before others see this, you should go to the edit screen an insert your missing spaces. Also should this be chapter 8?
Comment Written 19-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2015
Those anomalies come when you use foreign language and I forgot to edit that. Thanks for pointing them out. I have corrected them. You are write it is chapter 8 and I have made that change also. Appreciate your encouraging comments. Hope you will read the book.
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