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Comment from TAB_that's me
Though I used to be scared of them, I actually love the bees now and welcome them. Didn't have many this year though. Lovely poem filled with imagery.
Teresa
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Though I used to be scared of them, I actually love the bees now and welcome them. Didn't have many this year though. Lovely poem filled with imagery.
Teresa
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thank you Teresa. Yes, the population is on the decline.
Comment from mumsyone
A great sonnet about the bumblebee! The only line I stumbled on was at the very last: So, carefully watch these bees, if you please. I hope you can work with the meter, to make it flow a little smoother. Maybe something like: So watch these bumblebees, if you please. (Just a suggestion.) Otherwise, it's very good.
Lois
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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A great sonnet about the bumblebee! The only line I stumbled on was at the very last: So, carefully watch these bees, if you please. I hope you can work with the meter, to make it flow a little smoother. Maybe something like: So watch these bumblebees, if you please. (Just a suggestion.) Otherwise, it's very good.
Lois
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thank you mumsyone. Ill work on yhat.
Comment from AnnieDawn
You have done your research on the subject of your poem. I was quite amazed at the rhyme and flow of this type of poem. You did very carrying it through while telling a story about the bumble bee. It was nice to read your summary about the Asian Sonnet as I am unfamiliar with this type of poetry. Great poem, great job.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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You have done your research on the subject of your poem. I was quite amazed at the rhyme and flow of this type of poem. You did very carrying it through while telling a story about the bumble bee. It was nice to read your summary about the Asian Sonnet as I am unfamiliar with this type of poetry. Great poem, great job.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thank you very much Annie.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem depicting the often misunderstood, and disliked, bumblebee. Notes about them interesting as well. Bees do indeed form their own societies around a queen.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Well written poem depicting the often misunderstood, and disliked, bumblebee. Notes about them interesting as well. Bees do indeed form their own societies around a queen.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you Brett. Yes, i didn't get into that, but you are right.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
An interesting sonnet form. The distinctive black and yellow bumble bees are a pleasure to watch while they are busy. They can also be dangerous when they attack and sting, so be careful around them. Thank you for the information on the bumble bees
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An interesting sonnet form. The distinctive black and yellow bumble bees are a pleasure to watch while they are busy. They can also be dangerous when they attack and sting, so be careful around them. Thank you for the information on the bumble bees
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you Sandra. They are interesting.
Comment from His Grayness
This is an absolutely delightful lesson on poetry and grand education on many other factors of nature involving Bees. As always, this writer delivers meaningful gifts of wisdom and knowledge to poets over a broad span of intellectual space and genre. Many thanks again for a delightful and buzzing experience! HIS GRAYNESS
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This is an absolutely delightful lesson on poetry and grand education on many other factors of nature involving Bees. As always, this writer delivers meaningful gifts of wisdom and knowledge to poets over a broad span of intellectual space and genre. Many thanks again for a delightful and buzzing experience! HIS GRAYNESS
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you Vance. I often dont get considered a buzzing experience. Lol.
