A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Memories"Assorted poems of love
23 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
I love the color scheme you used. I see nothing to warn about. It is a lovely poem, well rhymed, of a memory of a love now past. It reminds us of similar memories we cherish.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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I love the color scheme you used. I see nothing to warn about. It is a lovely poem, well rhymed, of a memory of a love now past. It reminds us of similar memories we cherish.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Hello, Seaglass. Thanks for reading and leaving this lovely review:)
Always,
Missy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
As you can imagine I have no six stars left. If I did you would have it. The artwork is stunning. I love this poem as I love all your poems. So well written always from the heart.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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As you can imagine I have no six stars left. If I did you would have it. The artwork is stunning. I love this poem as I love all your poems. So well written always from the heart.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Big hug, Darlene. There is no need for a 6 ( though lovely) lol, your appreciation of my work is invaluable to me.
Love ya,
Missy
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Thank you Missy. You know I love your writing.
hugs,
Darlene
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, dear, this is exquisitely romantic, and not in any way offensive, IMHO - but I can understand that you put the warning on because there are children on this site too. But it's really very beautiful, and the mixed meter works wonderfully.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Oh, dear, this is exquisitely romantic, and not in any way offensive, IMHO - but I can understand that you put the warning on because there are children on this site too. But it's really very beautiful, and the mixed meter works wonderfully.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Thanks, hon...a big hug for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate every single one, but the ones from my friends and I see you as one, mean the world.
Missy
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Very much my pleasure. :)
Comment from pbroussard209
Okay, this is my third attempt today to try and review your poem. I gave up earlier and took a nap.
I thought your poem was wonderfully seductive and read smoothly. My only snag in reading was rhyming the words calm and come. I could be wrong on that one, I usually am when it comes to poetry. But all the other stanza's rhyme well.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Okay, this is my third attempt today to try and review your poem. I gave up earlier and took a nap.
I thought your poem was wonderfully seductive and read smoothly. My only snag in reading was rhyming the words calm and come. I could be wrong on that one, I usually am when it comes to poetry. But all the other stanza's rhyme well.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Grrr, Thanks sugga, sometimes with the way I talk and my accent, things sound different to me...lol.
I love and appreciate this review. I guess the site hit a snag yesterday, I couldn't get on either.
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a gorgeous presentation, Missy, and your poem itself is beautifully written. Good rhyming and slant rhyming (marry/memory). The green font on black background looks great and really stands out.
Good work...and all while drinking coffee, too, lol.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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What a gorgeous presentation, Missy, and your poem itself is beautifully written. Good rhyming and slant rhyming (marry/memory). The green font on black background looks great and really stands out.
Good work...and all while drinking coffee, too, lol.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015
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Lol, now dang it Dean, I have to go and look up what "slant rhyming" is. Smack on your hands...lol. I love how you can turn a review into an outing in fun.
Missy
Thanks hon.
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Ha-ha, well, you ought to know me by now, Missy.
You're very welcome, it's a great poem. :}
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Big hug sugga!!
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, I don't think a warning is necessary ...you see more on a public beach...or on TV today....your words are just beautiful...so sensual...so very touching...how wonderful true love is...a beautiful poem...and a stunning picture....Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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HI Missy, I don't think a warning is necessary ...you see more on a public beach...or on TV today....your words are just beautiful...so sensual...so very touching...how wonderful true love is...a beautiful poem...and a stunning picture....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you hon for this great review... You make me smile with the beach comparison... Lol
Always,
Missy
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you are so welcome Missy...have a wonderful day you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Jay Squires
I've been looking again and again at the picture, and except that she's a beautiful woman, I see nothing worthy of censure.
Your poem is lovely, and deeply felt. You captured the "total" artistic experience of it with the font color being picked up by the green of her veil.
Good job, Missy.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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I've been looking again and again at the picture, and except that she's a beautiful woman, I see nothing worthy of censure.
Your poem is lovely, and deeply felt. You captured the "total" artistic experience of it with the font color being picked up by the green of her veil.
Good job, Missy.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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I think it was the hint of her boob that worried me. I have been wanting to do something fitting for this picture for awhile now.
Thanks, Jay, you always make me feel like I am producing something worthy. :)
Smilin,
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned and the overall presentation is stunning. You may want to put that warning on this as even though we are mostly adults here, you run the risk of somebody calling out the possibility of kids seeing it. This has a very soft, and lyrical flow to it making for a most enjoyable read. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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This is beautifully penned and the overall presentation is stunning. You may want to put that warning on this as even though we are mostly adults here, you run the risk of somebody calling out the possibility of kids seeing it. This has a very soft, and lyrical flow to it making for a most enjoyable read. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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I placed the warning hon...Thanks as I was so undecided about it. Thanks also for the lovely review. You know how much I appreciate your view.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Delicious memory, darned if I don't believe I'm getting hungry already, but in my case, it just might be because I haven't eaten. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Delicious memory, darned if I don't believe I'm getting hungry already, but in my case, it just might be because I haven't eaten. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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LMAO....go eat and come back and read and see if you still hungry:)
Thanks sug for the luscious review...lol
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Beautiful poem Missy! :) You put this together over coffee this morning? Wow, you have a great imagination that works fast. :)
I love the photo. Very sexy and works with this perfect. You have such a wonderful talent.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Beautiful poem Missy! :) You put this together over coffee this morning? Wow, you have a great imagination that works fast. :)
I love the photo. Very sexy and works with this perfect. You have such a wonderful talent.
Shana :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Precious. I am glad you think so :) That compliment coming from one with extraordinary talent like yours means the world to me... Hugs
Missy
