Dr. Howler's Nightmares
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Drac And The Wolf"A collection of most unusual bedtime stories
18 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
You tell a great story here, my friend, and the rhymes and meter are excellent. I was impressed with your story-telling skills and wondered why I haven't been reading your stories and scripts. I will have to get busy and do that! Your poetry is excellent and shows you have a fine command of the form. I saw no problems anywhere.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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You tell a great story here, my friend, and the rhymes and meter are excellent. I was impressed with your story-telling skills and wondered why I haven't been reading your stories and scripts. I will have to get busy and do that! Your poetry is excellent and shows you have a fine command of the form. I saw no problems anywhere.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from barkingdog
Frankenstein and his army should have known better than to trust a Vampire and the Werewolf.
I wasn't expecting the Wolf to stake the Vampire, but a partnership may only be tentative when the venture is murder. hee-hee
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Frankenstein and his army should have known better than to trust a Vampire and the Werewolf.
I wasn't expecting the Wolf to stake the Vampire, but a partnership may only be tentative when the venture is murder. hee-hee
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Comment from Megalips
It's a funny take on horror and an entertaining read, for sure...a little bit of forced rhyme in some places, but it moves along at a nice pace and keeps me interested toward the final outcome. Picture works great! Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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It's a funny take on horror and an entertaining read, for sure...a little bit of forced rhyme in some places, but it moves along at a nice pace and keeps me interested toward the final outcome. Picture works great! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments and support very much.
Comment from TPAC
I found this work creative in its write, writer imagination excels in this poetic horror classic, I found interesting in its read, kids wonder land in my view,
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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I found this work creative in its write, writer imagination excels in this poetic horror classic, I found interesting in its read, kids wonder land in my view,
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thanks.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Well, I 'll not trust you that is for sure. My goodness, you have everyone turning on each other. Sent shivers up my spine ya did. I will send best wishes to you in the contest. I promise I will vote for you if you promise not to kill me. LOL.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Well, I 'll not trust you that is for sure. My goodness, you have everyone turning on each other. Sent shivers up my spine ya did. I will send best wishes to you in the contest. I promise I will vote for you if you promise not to kill me. LOL.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Always appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from cmowen87
The end caught me by total surprise. I loved the flow and rhyme. Allowed the reader to move easily ftom line to line. Loved the message. Who can you truly trust to be your friend. Great job
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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The end caught me by total surprise. I loved the flow and rhyme. Allowed the reader to move easily ftom line to line. Loved the message. Who can you truly trust to be your friend. Great job
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Halfree
I'm not much on harrow stories and I freely admit I went to every horror movie that came to town. As I grew older, I drifted away from horror stories. Got enough to scare the bejesus out of me by reading the world news and the evening TV. Like this one because of the form. Very nicely done and a pleasure to read....thanks for a pleasant interlude.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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I'm not much on harrow stories and I freely admit I went to every horror movie that came to town. As I grew older, I drifted away from horror stories. Got enough to scare the bejesus out of me by reading the world news and the evening TV. Like this one because of the form. Very nicely done and a pleasure to read....thanks for a pleasant interlude.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this one. You are so right about the evening news, especially the way Reporters always slant stories so they sell more copies. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Death and destruction. No pretty sight (I think a comma rather than a period)
A well written horror poem with good rhymes. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Death and destruction. No pretty sight (I think a comma rather than a period)
A well written horror poem with good rhymes. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Anonymous,
~Drac And The Wolf
Drac called werewolf because he didn't want to hunt alone... a lonely vampire? LOL This story poem is not very scary, it is cute.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Hello Anonymous,
~Drac And The Wolf
Drac called werewolf because he didn't want to hunt alone... a lonely vampire? LOL This story poem is not very scary, it is cute.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem for the Horror Story in a poem contest
Nicely rhymed in aabb pattern
It reads well with good consistent meter
Three of the biggest in horror land
Wolfman, Drac and Frank
"Who can you trust to be your friend?'
I wouldn't recommend any of those three.
Very good horror combined with fun
Excellent picture to poem match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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This is an excellent poem for the Horror Story in a poem contest
Nicely rhymed in aabb pattern
It reads well with good consistent meter
Three of the biggest in horror land
Wolfman, Drac and Frank
"Who can you trust to be your friend?'
I wouldn't recommend any of those three.
Very good horror combined with fun
Excellent picture to poem match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Glad you enjoyed this one.
