Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

A beautiful poem about a love affair, the woman trusted her man and he took her for granted but deep inside he knew he was a very lucky man to have her. Good job!
~gypsy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Nice song lyrics with feelings expressed for a loved one. Well chosen words and feelings. I loved the picture, most enjoyable read, Faye

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

The song lyric is very nice. I didn't know you wrote them. Do you sing them too? If not what happens to the lyrics you write. It's fun to learn more about a person and their talent.

Kat

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks very much for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

What a surprise. I didn't know you write songs and then so very well. This is a dedication to the person you love, and believe in. Great words. All best. Ulla

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

You are very talented at song lyrics, and this one is no exception ( oh yeah). A touching story about a performed and his girl who puts up with a lot because she believes in him. Well done!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Such a tragic poem I say this as it reminds me of a man I knew with six kids and and a wife who always believed in him
He never changed

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the words to your song,
And the words are so true.
Someone is always waiting for the others to change and most of the time it never comes.
That's the foolish thing call love.
Cookie

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

reply by misscookie on 17-Sep-2015

Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, that is truly believing in someone....to love so much...and have all that trust...very well written you...and I love your picture...love ya Linda xxoo luff

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

reply by l.raven on 17-Sep-2015

you are always so welcome Ine...have a wonderful day sweet girl...xxoo luff

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

It is nice when somebody believes in you. Love is a two way street, and that belief, trust and love needs to be felt and shared by both for true, lasting success in a relationship.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A weakness will often overcomes a strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by c_lucas on 18-Sep-2015

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie