Reflections Of Color
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Comment from rjuselius
this is a tragic little love story dear anonymous! it's often we come around and see what we have left behind, we want in our future. unfortunately love does not work like this.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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this is a tragic little love story dear anonymous! it's often we come around and see what we have left behind, we want in our future. unfortunately love does not work like this.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from pbroussard209
A broken heart is the worst, I have had my heart broken too many times to count. This was a great poem about love lost, very detailed and easy to follow the progress of the situation. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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A broken heart is the worst, I have had my heart broken too many times to count. This was a great poem about love lost, very detailed and easy to follow the progress of the situation. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Comment from Sanku
A well written poem about break up .the poet is able to bring out the pain the persona is feeling .the sense of los and helplessness come out very well. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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A well written poem about break up .the poet is able to bring out the pain the persona is feeling .the sense of los and helplessness come out very well. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
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Comment from royowen
This is a brilliant poem addressing a situation in which you've lost control and feel the helplessness of losing someone who is someone you built your future dreams on! Well written in nicely flowing verse, in emotional language that drips from the pen, so, written in great descriptive words in abcb rhyming until the last stanza. Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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This is a brilliant poem addressing a situation in which you've lost control and feel the helplessness of losing someone who is someone you built your future dreams on! Well written in nicely flowing verse, in emotional language that drips from the pen, so, written in great descriptive words in abcb rhyming until the last stanza. Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015
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Comment from Delahay
I can feel the pain of an unrequited, and perhaps a little bit obsessive and possessive, love. Perhaps the fact that the one person defines themselves by their love is what makes it not work out.
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I can feel the pain of an unrequited, and perhaps a little bit obsessive and possessive, love. Perhaps the fact that the one person defines themselves by their love is what makes it not work out.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
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Comment from tfawcus
This poem has a great rhythm and would set to music well to make a song. For the contest I'd probably hyphenate 'used-to-be' in the same way as you might hyphenate 'has-been'.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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This poem has a great rhythm and would set to music well to make a song. For the contest I'd probably hyphenate 'used-to-be' in the same way as you might hyphenate 'has-been'.
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. And, I agree so I did make it "used-to-be".
