A cat ruined.
A short story about our dog, Smokey24 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine. That's funny about smokey's favorite toy being a stuffed cat LOL. I enjoy the exploits of the little bloke. Well done...
One spag...
"Unfortunately the(y) did not have the same cat anymore."
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
G'day Ine. That's funny about smokey's favorite toy being a stuffed cat LOL. I enjoy the exploits of the little bloke. Well done...
One spag...
"Unfortunately the(y) did not have the same cat anymore."
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 03-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the tip and Good morning Fez.
Comment from nelliesellie
I like the picture of Smokey. You spoil him like I spoiled my dogs. I enjoyed the story, but I was confused by the last sentence. Does he ear floors in some places but not at home? Great work.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
I like the picture of Smokey. You spoil him like I spoiled my dogs. I enjoyed the story, but I was confused by the last sentence. Does he ear floors in some places but not at home? Great work.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from misscookie
I enjoy reading about your dog Smokey
I see there is never a dull moment
.That's why everyone says they are just like kids.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
I enjoy reading about your dog Smokey
I see there is never a dull moment
.That's why everyone says they are just like kids.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 03-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Yes, You are right.
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You're very welcome, you do the same.
Cookie
Comment from l.raven
LOL..Ine, Smokey sounds like a hand full...good thing you got him a few more toys...he really is a sweetie...what a cute little...thank you for sharing sweet girl...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
LOL..Ine, Smokey sounds like a hand full...good thing you got him a few more toys...he really is a sweetie...what a cute little...thank you for sharing sweet girl...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Treischel
Yes indeed, you should have a very happy puppy with lots of new play things. He sure is a cute little fellow. Don't you mean he licks the floors, otherwise your last sentence doesn't make any sense.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
Yes indeed, you should have a very happy puppy with lots of new play things. He sure is a cute little fellow. Don't you mean he licks the floors, otherwise your last sentence doesn't make any sense.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Bryana
Cute dog!!! your story reminds me of kids
when, usually the baby, breaks his brother's
toy. But, as the doggy, gets more than one
toy.
I wish you a very happy Sunday.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
Cute dog!!! your story reminds me of kids
when, usually the baby, breaks his brother's
toy. But, as the doggy, gets more than one
toy.
I wish you a very happy Sunday.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from LIJ Red
I think there should be a Y added to make it read "THEY did not have the same cat anymore." The final sentence needs a little clearing up- Did he eat the floor in the store, and you are glad he doesn't eat the floors at home? The photo sure looks like a cherished pet.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
I think there should be a Y added to make it read "THEY did not have the same cat anymore." The final sentence needs a little clearing up- Did he eat the floor in the store, and you are glad he doesn't eat the floors at home? The photo sure looks like a cherished pet.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks for the tip, I will check.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Cute story. Cute doggie. I have three little dogs so I can relate.
Found an error you didn't mean:
he [eats] the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too.
I think you meant to say he LICKS the floor where you typed that first EATS.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
Cute story. Cute doggie. I have three little dogs so I can relate.
Found an error you didn't mean:
he [eats] the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too.
I think you meant to say he LICKS the floor where you typed that first EATS.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks.
Comment from c_lucas
It appears you don't agree with Smokey when he expresses his opinion of cats. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Your post has good imagery.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
It appears you don't agree with Smokey when he expresses his opinion of cats. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Your post has good imagery.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
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You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Ine. This is an adorable story of an adorable dog. I think the last sentence is anticlimactic and unnecessary:
"The only thing that is slightly less nice, (this part is confusing--does he eat the floor or doesn't he?)"he eats the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too." Do you mean that he chews the floor but does not swallow it? As I mentioned before, I don't think this sentence is necessary. I would end your story at "happy doggy." Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
Hi Ine. This is an adorable story of an adorable dog. I think the last sentence is anticlimactic and unnecessary:
"The only thing that is slightly less nice, (this part is confusing--does he eat the floor or doesn't he?)"he eats the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too." Do you mean that he chews the floor but does not swallow it? As I mentioned before, I don't think this sentence is necessary. I would end your story at "happy doggy." Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks, I will change.