To The End Of Love
Dance me till the end of love24 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
In your notes "know to write" should be "known to write". Spreading wings as a writer can be a very good thing. Helps us be much more creative. This well written poem depicts the truth that many times for us writers our inspiration for the things we write about just seems to appear from so many sources. A concept some people have a very hard time understanding.
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In your notes "know to write" should be "known to write". Spreading wings as a writer can be a very good thing. Helps us be much more creative. This well written poem depicts the truth that many times for us writers our inspiration for the things we write about just seems to appear from so many sources. A concept some people have a very hard time understanding.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
Comment from Chrissy710
What a profound reflection TK and isn't nice to have many sources of inspiration form which to pen a poem. A rhapsody in blue nice word choice to describe staying too long. Keep dancing though sound like you need a tango lol. Different post but nice sentiments Cheers Christine
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What a profound reflection TK and isn't nice to have many sources of inspiration form which to pen a poem. A rhapsody in blue nice word choice to describe staying too long. Keep dancing though sound like you need a tango lol. Different post but nice sentiments Cheers Christine
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
Comment from nomi338
This is one of the deepest things you've ever written. The changes that one's mind goes through during a love affair are many. There's the anticipation as you get to know each other, Is it going to be a one night stand or will it last for awhile? You ask yourself if you can see the two of you still together five, maybe ten years down the line. i have a question, if you lose someone and it does not hurt, was it love, was it real?
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This is one of the deepest things you've ever written. The changes that one's mind goes through during a love affair are many. There's the anticipation as you get to know each other, Is it going to be a one night stand or will it last for awhile? You ask yourself if you can see the two of you still together five, maybe ten years down the line. i have a question, if you lose someone and it does not hurt, was it love, was it real?
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, TK
_ My, this is different for you.
_ Also, the song. I've never listened to Cohen, but I just did, this song, as well as a couple other ones. Interesting voice.
_ Indeed, a time for love, a time to cry, a time to let it go --- be it through death, or it's just ran its course.
_ I like this vulnerable part in you, my Hawaiian friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
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Hi, TK
_ My, this is different for you.
_ Also, the song. I've never listened to Cohen, but I just did, this song, as well as a couple other ones. Interesting voice.
_ Indeed, a time for love, a time to cry, a time to let it go --- be it through death, or it's just ran its course.
_ I like this vulnerable part in you, my Hawaiian friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
