A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Magic"Assorted poems of love
30 total reviews
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi Missy
How is it that I only find your work in FB on your page and not on mine or in FS. This is a remarkable poem, and beautiful message. Please don't lock me out
Bear
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Hi Missy
How is it that I only find your work in FB on your page and not on mine or in FS. This is a remarkable poem, and beautiful message. Please don't lock me out
Bear
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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I just shared it on my page...I don't know Bear why you don't see it in FanStory, honestly!!! I could never lock you out Bear...Never!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Justafan...
_ So true. Every word you said.
_ Great artwork and formatting.
_ I love creating work from artwork/book.
_ Such inspiration.
_ Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Hi, Justafan...
_ So true. Every word you said.
_ Great artwork and formatting.
_ I love creating work from artwork/book.
_ Such inspiration.
_ Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thanks a bunch Jax :)...I love how you did the lil face!!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
A very nice and true poem. Books/poems, he words we read and write take us anywhere we desire to go. A blessing for us word people. I enjoyed reading your fine piece. Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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A very nice and true poem. Books/poems, he words we read and write take us anywhere we desire to go. A blessing for us word people. I enjoyed reading your fine piece. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Marilyn, thank you for using your valuable time to stop and read my humble offering :)
Always,
Missy
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My pleasure.
Comment from meggie13
Your poem is beautifully presented . I think this is like romancing a book . I used to love to take a book and get lost in it .You can visit places you never heard of before. Visualize everything like you were watching a movie. Feel the emotions of the characters . It is a whole new world. It is well composed and a joy to read.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Your poem is beautifully presented . I think this is like romancing a book . I used to love to take a book and get lost in it .You can visit places you never heard of before. Visualize everything like you were watching a movie. Feel the emotions of the characters . It is a whole new world. It is well composed and a joy to read.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Hi Mom...I have been so busy reading to earn those FanStory bucks ...My eyes are sad. I wanted to see what would happen if I posted with a dollar or more but, alas I only got enough to post and add12 cent pumps. Next time...lol. Stay close hon...I will be reading a lot again for whatever comes to me.
Always,
Missy
Thank you for being here for me BTW.XX
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Missy, the more money the better your write does . Every one looks for the best paid ones. Money talks. Love, Mom
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Missy, the more money the better your write does . Every one looks for the best paid ones. Money talks. Love, Mom
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
here I go, turning the page again... mystified in though of magic composed through written word and delivered with emotion to stir the soul... yeah, read, sing-- listen... it all transcends us to another visual journey... maybe we identify with it, or maybe just somewhere, somehow, something we should know to allow the fire in our knowing to inspire. Yes, there is certainly such a MAGIC in the power of written word and more so the connection it affords us to be able to fly in between the lines.
A wonderfully constructed and presented poem... the magic visual gave your words-- wings... a true pleasure to ponder in your thoughts.
I'm not sure if it's just my screen... but the first two line of your last verse has the 'G's cut off... in magic and page... but of course it did not take away the magic.
With our thoughts we create,
a reason to fly,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Hi Missy,
here I go, turning the page again... mystified in though of magic composed through written word and delivered with emotion to stir the soul... yeah, read, sing-- listen... it all transcends us to another visual journey... maybe we identify with it, or maybe just somewhere, somehow, something we should know to allow the fire in our knowing to inspire. Yes, there is certainly such a MAGIC in the power of written word and more so the connection it affords us to be able to fly in between the lines.
A wonderfully constructed and presented poem... the magic visual gave your words-- wings... a true pleasure to ponder in your thoughts.
I'm not sure if it's just my screen... but the first two line of your last verse has the 'G's cut off... in magic and page... but of course it did not take away the magic.
With our thoughts we create,
a reason to fly,
James vx's.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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First, let me thank you sugga for this splendid review. Second, the "G" thang, well, this is first I heard of it. But, I am going now to look and see if I can see it :) Thanks again for goin "walkabout" through my lil piece :)
Always,
Missy
Ya know when I was 19 I almost signed on to be a mail order bride for an AUSSIE...Chickened out when I got to the door..lol!!
Comment from MelB
Very strong imagery used. Good rhythm, flow and rhyme. I like the repeating line. So many emotions and words that do touch the soul.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Very strong imagery used. Good rhythm, flow and rhyme. I like the repeating line. So many emotions and words that do touch the soul.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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MelB, thank you for this splendid review of my work. I will certainly return the favor :).
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, Missy, if there weren't magic in the written world we would all be wasting a lot of time hanging around this site, right?
Your poem explores the mystery of the magic and finish it with a challenge to "Pick up a book, turn a page
Take a look....you be the guage.
Only one suggestion would be to never use more than three dots to separate clauses, unless it is at the end of a full sentence.
I do like your poem, Missy.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Well, Missy, if there weren't magic in the written world we would all be wasting a lot of time hanging around this site, right?
Your poem explores the mystery of the magic and finish it with a challenge to "Pick up a book, turn a page
Take a look....you be the guage.
Only one suggestion would be to never use more than three dots to separate clauses, unless it is at the end of a full sentence.
I do like your poem, Missy.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Grrrrr. I had to go look and dang it, your right!!!! Okay, I am on it. I am pleased however that you liked my work enough to leave a review hon.
Thanks!
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is very well constructed as the rhyme and meter are consistent and fluid throughout when read aloud. I thought your imagery strong and the choice of repeated line elevates the piece by keeping the reader's mind focused on the mystical power of words to reach out and touch souls long after they have been penned. One suggestion I would make is to try not to repeat specific words or images in a poem - in this case stirred and stir - always seek to either enhance the previous image or introduce a new one with a similar tone. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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This is very well constructed as the rhyme and meter are consistent and fluid throughout when read aloud. I thought your imagery strong and the choice of repeated line elevates the piece by keeping the reader's mind focused on the mystical power of words to reach out and touch souls long after they have been penned. One suggestion I would make is to try not to repeat specific words or images in a poem - in this case stirred and stir - always seek to either enhance the previous image or introduce a new one with a similar tone. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you, my sweet friend, for this well-written review. I have changed "stir" to touch :). As always, I listen and learn when a great writer gives me advice :0)
Always,
Missy
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HUGS!!! I just want you to be collecting up on those rare sixes you deserve. Blessings.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very true, Missy, and very well stated.
Has anyone who's ever been an avid reader read a book, then saw that book made into a movie, and after seeing the movie said, "Oh, the movie was so-o-o much better than the book!"
I doubt it. And there's a good reason they don't.
The mind, when fully immersed in a good book or story, can take us places no filmmaker could possibly imagine or dream of. Even the classic film "Gone With the Wind", starring Clark Gable as Rhett Butler, and Vivien Leigh as Scarlett O'Hara, as good as that film is, it's nowhere as good as the book written by Margaret Mitchell. At least it isn't in my opinion.
Cool presentation, love the repetitive line, "There is such magic in the written word" because in reality, there truly is.
~Dean
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Very true, Missy, and very well stated.
Has anyone who's ever been an avid reader read a book, then saw that book made into a movie, and after seeing the movie said, "Oh, the movie was so-o-o much better than the book!"
I doubt it. And there's a good reason they don't.
The mind, when fully immersed in a good book or story, can take us places no filmmaker could possibly imagine or dream of. Even the classic film "Gone With the Wind", starring Clark Gable as Rhett Butler, and Vivien Leigh as Scarlett O'Hara, as good as that film is, it's nowhere as good as the book written by Margaret Mitchell. At least it isn't in my opinion.
Cool presentation, love the repetitive line, "There is such magic in the written word" because in reality, there truly is.
~Dean
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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I love your reviews Dean. They explore the whole work with a wonderful eye. Thank you for this splendid review of my lil offering :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from EricBrady
There is such magic in your words. They ring so true. Beautifully written and beautiful rhyme. Whether written, read preached or sung, there is a healing power in each word. So much laughter and joy can replace sorrow through the magic of word. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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There is such magic in your words. They ring so true. Beautifully written and beautiful rhyme. Whether written, read preached or sung, there is a healing power in each word. So much laughter and joy can replace sorrow through the magic of word. Beautiful.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you kind sir, for this wonderful review of my humble offering :)
Always justafan,
Missy
