Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

nice short commentary about grace and the power of grace a gift from the divine that indeed brings us peace. Although I am not a Christian I can appreciate the message.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem, Jake. Both are much appreciated.
Joan

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Joan,

You know I love short poems rich in imagery and yours is beautiful. I enjoy the lanterns form.

Clever wording thought provoking. Grace is a precious gift.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Thanks for the nice review and high rating, MariVal.
Joan

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

I enjoyed this succinct verse.
I am unfamiliar with this poetry style, but I responded in a positive way.
The use of the word "Grace," on the first line, is then described through the following lines, is very creative and clever.
At least that is my interpretation.
Poetry at its best causes the reader provocative thought.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Thanks for the encoruaging review, K.L..
Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Get God's grace that is divinely given to you and now you find how God's grace brings peace, for omniscient God knows everything and only one who deserves for gets grace for peace; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2022

Al,
Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are just beautiful and so true. I found this short
poem has the perfect words. I thought about how love and peace are
the most important to me. I am just not okay with out them. The
poem flows and connects well. The poem says it all for me! Thank you!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Thanks for the encouraging words and high rating, harmony.
Joan

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Grace can be given by anyone and still bring peace. Doesn't need to be divinely given.
I offer grace to my friends and those who care for me. I offer peace when there seem no other means but to end the struggle.
Thanks for offering one of many choices to offer grace and peace.
Jesse

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Thanks, Jesse, for the review. You may be right. I though God gives His grace to someone to act kindly to others so give them Grace. It is a chain reaction.
Joan

reply by Jesse James Doty on 09-Aug-2022

It may be a chain reaction, but it perpetuates in us all.
Jesse

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Grace: Could very well be but I've scanned the aisles of Walmart, and unless it's misplaced I cannot find evidence on any face therein that it's a part of their corporate moniker.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Thanks for the review. I try to stay away from shopping as much as I can.
Joan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Grace is such a marvellous gift, it does bring peace, mainly because it gives grace no matter what, past, future, and present, we can relax in Christ, well done. Great lanurne, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Thanks for the positive comments and high rating, Roy.
Joan

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful lanterne poem in great foem! Yes, you're right! God's grace which was given to all humankind in the form of Jesus, has won peace for all of us.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Thanks, Helen, for reading and reviewing my poem, Glad you liked it.
Joan

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Fine sentiments, Joan, and I share your perspective.
In passing, you might consider capitalizing "peace" as every other line begins with a capital letter.

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2022

Diane,
Thanks for reading, reviewing and editing this poem. I will make the change.
Joan