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A Gift Freely Given

a lanturne poem

23 total reviews 
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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A thank-you and a prayer to the Lord for whoever is responsible for preparing our meals. A debt of gratitude is due to the chefs and wait staff of restaurants for their tireless efforts. A gleaming smile is the result of feeling appreciated. I am grateful that you shared this.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Thanks for the review, Carolyn. And you are right.
    Joan
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 13-Aug-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks, Raul.
    Joan
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a simple yet profound poem about what can bring about peace which is much needed in this world. I like the alliteration with "grace" and "gift".

Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem, Lisa.
    Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This very short poem speaks volumes of a gift that was paid for by Jesus on the cross. Thank you for saying it so eloquently. I wish more people could hear this word. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks for the review, Barbara.
    Joan
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I think grace is one of those qualities we sometimes forget about, and it transcends all boundaries of physical or emotional. My Nan, recent passed at the grand age of 93, was called Grace, and it suited her perfectly. I very much enjoyed your piece.

Mike

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks, Mike, for reading and reviewing my poem, I am glad you liked it. Sorry for your loss.
    Joan
Comment from Wendy G
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Very well said in few words. True grace comes from God, and is a precious gift bringing spiritual peace. Man may imitate the act at some level, and that should certainly be our role - to reflect God's grace and offer it to others.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks, Wendy. You are so right.
    Joan
Comment from karenina
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Very nice lanturne poem (12341 Syllable).

While grace can more generally be defined as
"courteous goodwill". (Dictinary.com)

It's clear you were speaking from a spiritual place, and " divine grace" surely brings peace!

We could use a bit more of it these days!

Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks for the comments and for all the stars, Kareninin. Yes, we can.
    Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-You wrote a good lanturne poem, Joan.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I like your descriptions of grace, "divinely given"
and filled with peace.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thank for your continued suppot, Pam. It is much appreciated.
    Joan
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Aug-2022
    You are welcome, Joan.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Author,
Your lantern poem is beautiful in appearance and content.
Grace is one of the best gifts God bestows on us. It's His love and protection.
Good luck with all your work.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Thanks for the comments and the good luck wishes. Blessings to you too, Cindy.
    Joan
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 12-Aug-2022
    You?re welcome, Joan.😊
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Isn't it the most wonderful thing in life that we are not required to EARN God's love--that there's no set of works we must complete to have salvation, grace, and peace? In these few words, you have conveyed a sweet message

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
    Thanks for the review, Janice. Yes it is.
    Joan