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I am what I am,my thoughts, my words,my poems

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Comment from TPAC
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Writer in this work detailed hopes with desired wishes, writer proclaiming this bonded trust was just a dream, work recalling in me the Bible written thoughts -let a man who had a dream, tell one.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
    Thanks for your in depth comments
Comment from tfawcus
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Multiple interpretations here, but my mind goes to John F Kennedy's famous speech. Probably right off target! The octet has me puzzled.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
    thknx for your comments