Dr. Howler's Nightmares
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Comment from mattbrighter
The maniacal cockroach and his plan for world domination displayed a great personality that really had me invested. I also enjoyed the humorous tone. Well done. :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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The maniacal cockroach and his plan for world domination displayed a great personality that really had me invested. I also enjoyed the humorous tone. Well done. :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. I will pass this on to Doctor Howler.
Comment from Lulube
Your dreaming mind was working over time with this plot. But there are super bugs in us that only 4-5 anti-biotics will work on these bugs so it is so possible that the outside bugs, which they are come to think of it, become superior to our insecticides. Our biologicals are here but are not used widely enough to work on that which we don't see until infestations.
Hope I don't have a Bug Out # 2 dream. lol
well written
lulube
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Your dreaming mind was working over time with this plot. But there are super bugs in us that only 4-5 anti-biotics will work on these bugs so it is so possible that the outside bugs, which they are come to think of it, become superior to our insecticides. Our biologicals are here but are not used widely enough to work on that which we don't see until infestations.
Hope I don't have a Bug Out # 2 dream. lol
well written
lulube
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much. Maybe Doctor Howler will write a Bug Out #2 just because you asked for one.
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lol welcome time will tell
lulkuybe
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oops can't even spell my own name
lulube
Comment from Jacob Collins
I can imagine such a thing happening, hopefully way into the future though and certainly not in my lifetime. As humans we do seem to think that we rule everything on earth but that may just come back to haunt us one day. A well written piece, Brett, I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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I can imagine such a thing happening, hopefully way into the future though and certainly not in my lifetime. As humans we do seem to think that we rule everything on earth but that may just come back to haunt us one day. A well written piece, Brett, I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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I HATE roaches, and to think this was an actual dream I had. Appreciate your comments and support indeed.
Comment from ellie6
A suitably horrible offering. It makes my flesh creep, imagining hoards of hungry cockroaches advancing on my town. They say that cockroaches are the oldest living creature, I know they are damn hard to get rid of.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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A suitably horrible offering. It makes my flesh creep, imagining hoards of hungry cockroaches advancing on my town. They say that cockroaches are the oldest living creature, I know they are damn hard to get rid of.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Appreciate your comments and support. Roaches! Absolutely a nightmare indeed!
Comment from w.j.debi
My goodness but this is a nightmare. I had visions of an old black and white movie with the locust hordes destroying everything in their path--and they were only normal sized. I did think once it would be interesting to write the history of the world according to the coach roach. They were here long before us and probably will be long after. What a creepy story!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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My goodness but this is a nightmare. I had visions of an old black and white movie with the locust hordes destroying everything in their path--and they were only normal sized. I did think once it would be interesting to write the history of the world according to the coach roach. They were here long before us and probably will be long after. What a creepy story!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Yes those little buggies are very CREEPY! Agree, as much as I HATE those things that they will probably be here long after mankind is gone. Glad you enjoyed this little nightmare.
Comment from MsPetra
I liked the idea of your story. You could have went anywhere with this.
What I had a problem with is that it is told in narration. It talked about "action", but had no action. Also it seemed as if you had the bugs acting like humans. They even blew a bugle at one point. A bug blowing a bugle. I can't see it, not in my wildest imagination.
You glossed over what could have been the only action. One moment the bugs are about to go through Cambridge and the next they are past it.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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I liked the idea of your story. You could have went anywhere with this.
What I had a problem with is that it is told in narration. It talked about "action", but had no action. Also it seemed as if you had the bugs acting like humans. They even blew a bugle at one point. A bug blowing a bugle. I can't see it, not in my wildest imagination.
You glossed over what could have been the only action. One moment the bugs are about to go through Cambridge and the next they are past it.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
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You are welcome. If you take out the bugle and let the bugs play out the action it could be riveting. I would love to read that!
Comment from sandragee
Five feet long and fifty pairs of legs super bugs with fangs. I want to thank you for adding another phobia to my list of fears. The real scary part is that I can image an experiment like that being attempted in a lab somewhere. Nice and gory. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Five feet long and fifty pairs of legs super bugs with fangs. I want to thank you for adding another phobia to my list of fears. The real scary part is that I can image an experiment like that being attempted in a lab somewhere. Nice and gory. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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You are welcome. Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Gross and disgusting is my thought of your nightmare. I also do not believe it is proper reading for children of all ages. I have to go to Cambridge once a month I wonder if this story will pop into my head the next time I travel there. The story is wonderful for those who love it gory. The artwork is grand. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Gross and disgusting is my thought of your nightmare. I also do not believe it is proper reading for children of all ages. I have to go to Cambridge once a month I wonder if this story will pop into my head the next time I travel there. The story is wonderful for those who love it gory. The artwork is grand. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your support and comments. You may also enjoy my stories Harvester and Mummified Mommy.
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Brett,
I will try to get to them today. If not I will get to them first thing tomorrow. I look forward to reading them.
Darlene
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Brett. Yuck! I'm not afraid of many things that can be seen by the human eye, but roaches are one of the few. Five feet long, fifty legged roaches, crikey mate! LOL. I'm bloody glad that was yourt nightmare. Fantastic stuff, you are good at these yearns Sir. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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G'day Brett. Yuck! I'm not afraid of many things that can be seen by the human eye, but roaches are one of the few. Five feet long, fifty legged roaches, crikey mate! LOL. I'm bloody glad that was yourt nightmare. Fantastic stuff, you are good at these yearns Sir. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you my friend. Glad you enjoyed this one. Yes I HATE roaches! Glad it was only a nightmare, nothing more.
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LOL. The things are a nightmare when I'm awake. Great work mate.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Uge the picture had me even before I read the piece.
Nicely done and a scary on too boot.
Well written piece and entertaining.
"dine' has a whole different meaning.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Uge the picture had me even before I read the piece.
Nicely done and a scary on too boot.
Well written piece and entertaining.
"dine' has a whole different meaning.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Appreciate your comments and support indeed.
