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Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend.
This was indeed a vey witty little poem and so fun to read, I thought the rhyming was perfect.
I try to make an effort to check out the post where my artwork is used. Thank you for using it, I am honored.
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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Hello poet friend.
This was indeed a vey witty little poem and so fun to read, I thought the rhyming was perfect.
I try to make an effort to check out the post where my artwork is used. Thank you for using it, I am honored.
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Loyd, for the terrific review and use of the cool pic.
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You are very welcome, my best to you in your work.
Might I ask when you have time to check out my written work here on Fanstory.com
I currently have a poem titled, "May I Tell You a Story?"
I would be honored.
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment from lakeport
Witty Warren, indeed it takes all kind, That's a very nice expressed story poem, Very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. lakeport.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Witty Warren, indeed it takes all kind, That's a very nice expressed story poem, Very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
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you are very welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Bill,
Witty Warren is a poem about Warren, a writer. Other men make fun of him because he doesn't get his hands dirty doing the hard 'men' work. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Hello Bill,
Witty Warren is a poem about Warren, a writer. Other men make fun of him because he doesn't get his hands dirty doing the hard 'men' work. Good job!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thanks for reviewing, GBR.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good one, Bill. Can't blame Warren if he gets away with it. I'm sure a lot of people sit at their computers in the office pretending to work while browsing FS and other fun sites. :)
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Good one, Bill. Can't blame Warren if he gets away with it. I'm sure a lot of people sit at their computers in the office pretending to work while browsing FS and other fun sites. :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Phyllis, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Bill
Fun, Fun to read about Witty Warren
I like the lets say the (upbeat rhythm) and mixed rhyme of your poem.
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Hi Bill
Fun, Fun to read about Witty Warren
I like the lets say the (upbeat rhythm) and mixed rhyme of your poem.
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Gert, for your kind review.
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Smiles Bill
Gert
Comment from JustisVita
This is a delightful, comical piece of poetry. The photo fits the poem exactly. I think that I know a few "Witty Warrens," who would rather spend their days penning than working. I am one of them. Great job. I enjoyed reading this piece.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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This is a delightful, comical piece of poetry. The photo fits the poem exactly. I think that I know a few "Witty Warrens," who would rather spend their days penning than working. I am one of them. Great job. I enjoyed reading this piece.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, JV, for the spectacular review. Bill
Comment from Warren Rodgers
haha Very funny Bill! I like the alliteration in Witty Warren. You have used some unique rhyming words and I like this rhyme scheme as well. Your poem is good rhythm although I think it could benefit by some punctuation. I think the Fourth Stanza is my favorite. I took a close look at that notebook, it looks like my scribbling :) Unfortunately real life is the opposite for me. This was fun to read.
All the best, Rodger
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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haha Very funny Bill! I like the alliteration in Witty Warren. You have used some unique rhyming words and I like this rhyme scheme as well. Your poem is good rhythm although I think it could benefit by some punctuation. I think the Fourth Stanza is my favorite. I took a close look at that notebook, it looks like my scribbling :) Unfortunately real life is the opposite for me. This was fun to read.
All the best, Rodger
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I tend to use punctuation in poetry only when something requires a question mark, exclamation point, or ellipsis. Thank you for your kind review. Bill
Comment from krys123
Bill;
-I liked your very witty and clever piece of poetry where I found it very amusing and entertaining to read.
-All of your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm flow smoothly. Many of the rhyming's were neither forced nor labored also, which helped. However I suspect that the word pays uses grammatically incorrect. For it should be just singularly, pay.
-The rhythm flows smoothly as the cadence, timing and tempo make the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Bill;
-I liked your very witty and clever piece of poetry where I found it very amusing and entertaining to read.
-All of your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm flow smoothly. Many of the rhyming's were neither forced nor labored also, which helped. However I suspect that the word pays uses grammatically incorrect. For it should be just singularly, pay.
-The rhythm flows smoothly as the cadence, timing and tempo make the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Alex, for your kind review. The use of 'pays' is colloquial and commonly used to refer to paydays. "I have three pays this month." Bill
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thank you for the insight Bill and you are so welcome.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love your poem about the dream job! A well written and creative poem. I enjoy how you tell it in a fun and enjoyable way. The rhyme scheme is unique - but works for this poem. Very creative and well written.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I love your poem about the dream job! A well written and creative poem. I enjoy how you tell it in a fun and enjoyable way. The rhyme scheme is unique - but works for this poem. Very creative and well written.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Michael, for your kind review. Bill
Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes writing poetry will leave you tired. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and humor. Good job.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Sometimes writing poetry will leave you tired. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and humor. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Charlie, for the excellent review. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill. Charlie
