Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Fair Lady"Dawn of Chaos
9 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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This is an excellent story chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 23-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Glad certain aspects of this read was found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate: and comforting statements.
Comment from royowen
I can see and tell you are deeply moved in writing this poem. A fair entry in this love poem contest, and unusual sharing in free verse that is sweetly done, good lob, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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I can see and tell you are deeply moved in writing this poem. A fair entry in this love poem contest, and unusual sharing in free verse that is sweetly done, good lob, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Thanking you for this generous rate despite faults.
Comment from Jonbeyond
At first, I compliment your font ... it invites reading ... your style of writing for me, requires some deciphering ... it reminds me of when I was in school studying old world literature ... would it be asking much, if I asked you just what is this style?
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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At first, I compliment your font ... it invites reading ... your style of writing for me, requires some deciphering ... it reminds me of when I was in school studying old world literature ... would it be asking much, if I asked you just what is this style?
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Crazy, illiterate nonsense perhaps, not much a reader, lacking proper guidelines, if any, illustrating my writes. Simply things that captured my attention and jotted down to reflect upon, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Seems poet had a sweet dream about dancing a slow dance. So lovely and romantic was this night dream that makes one feel so good, and brings joy to an otherwise dull night. NICE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Seems poet had a sweet dream about dancing a slow dance. So lovely and romantic was this night dream that makes one feel so good, and brings joy to an otherwise dull night. NICE. liberty justice
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Being a child, not having a dream but an encounter. The event touched me. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about a fair lady loved in dreams encountered like a magic as her trance held on; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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This speaks about a fair lady loved in dreams encountered like a magic as her trance held on; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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A gentle soul, although different than myself. Yet, I felt as family. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a love poem contest entry richenstein is Rose imagery it float in red well there's no gray shoot grammar issues both contents of adjectives and objective were both excellent firmly in place along with the script to measure Lonnie perfectly good luck in this contest and have a blessed day talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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This is a love poem contest entry richenstein is Rose imagery it float in red well there's no gray shoot grammar issues both contents of adjectives and objective were both excellent firmly in place along with the script to measure Lonnie perfectly good luck in this contest and have a blessed day talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Forget the contest, not able to apply myself to guidelines. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from petalangela
This art work is stunningly awesome it shifts shape the more you look at it the shapes it assumes and then I read your poem.......
Weird totally weird like your grandmother still wants to dance
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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This art work is stunningly awesome it shifts shape the more you look at it the shapes it assumes and then I read your poem.......
Weird totally weird like your grandmother still wants to dance
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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I thank you for generous rate although baffled in comments about structuring, it shifts shape the more you look at it -weird indeed my event
Comment from hannahorion
This poem narrates a story that one was taken to see a doctor regarding dancing out of bed at night. The fear was that he had the "mental crazies". Hence he designs a plot to stay awake until twelve on the clock-face. He fought the sandman but eventually is subdued into drowsiness. Then he woke at twelve to see an apparition (his Fair Lady) approach him and together they dance "in mid floor". This summary does not do it justice and the poem must be read to appreciate the theme of sleepwalking and the reunion of his Fair Lady with him in the room. I found it interesting to read and think about. It is a poem written in free verse through the perspective of a child's vision.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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This poem narrates a story that one was taken to see a doctor regarding dancing out of bed at night. The fear was that he had the "mental crazies". Hence he designs a plot to stay awake until twelve on the clock-face. He fought the sandman but eventually is subdued into drowsiness. Then he woke at twelve to see an apparition (his Fair Lady) approach him and together they dance "in mid floor". This summary does not do it justice and the poem must be read to appreciate the theme of sleepwalking and the reunion of his Fair Lady with him in the room. I found it interesting to read and think about. It is a poem written in free verse through the perspective of a child's vision.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Thanking you for generous rate, indeed a childhood event not so inclined in the view of a vision story untold is she had a friend -they were instructing me, I rhought of flesh and spirit transformation
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My pleasure
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is an enjoyable and well written poem. I love some of the lines such as her face illustrating finger to lip - wonderful. Each line is enjoyable and the poem was a joy to read.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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This is an enjoyable and well written poem. I love some of the lines such as her face illustrating finger to lip - wonderful. Each line is enjoyable and the poem was a joy to read.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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I give thanks for your past guidance and this generous rate -not a dream I will give you that perception on this event
