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Comment from barkingdog
I never agreed with removal of so much body hair in men, but they never shaved where I would like them to-their smelly arm pits. I hate pit hair. It grosses me out. A man in a sleeveless shirt wants to put his arm around me--where does the pit hair rest? On MY shoulder which then smells like his arm pit for the rest of the day.
Sleeping without a t-shirt? My clean hair won't be resting on his naked pit hair.
Yuck!
That's the only hair I feel should be shaved on both men and women. Trimming the nether regions is essential, but a total ripping off of all pubic hair shouldn't be a standard procedure. Around the edges is fine.
What happens when the young men get older. Do they let the hair grow back?
Both sexes need to accept the other as they are.
Gorilla love-- I don't find him at all attractive. Skinny guys, geeky is more my type. They usually measure up. lol
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I never agreed with removal of so much body hair in men, but they never shaved where I would like them to-their smelly arm pits. I hate pit hair. It grosses me out. A man in a sleeveless shirt wants to put his arm around me--where does the pit hair rest? On MY shoulder which then smells like his arm pit for the rest of the day.
Sleeping without a t-shirt? My clean hair won't be resting on his naked pit hair.
Yuck!
That's the only hair I feel should be shaved on both men and women. Trimming the nether regions is essential, but a total ripping off of all pubic hair shouldn't be a standard procedure. Around the edges is fine.
What happens when the young men get older. Do they let the hair grow back?
Both sexes need to accept the other as they are.
Gorilla love-- I don't find him at all attractive. Skinny guys, geeky is more my type. They usually measure up. lol
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Agreed, lol!
Skinny guys, geeky is more my type. / Yeah, I'm married to one too. (And am happy!)
Brains over brawn any day.
Nicole
Comment from jpduck
This is such a calumny. OK, I can proudly boast the pot belly, but fail miserably in all other categories. I feel diminished . . . humiliated.
Great read. Well done.
Two SPAGs. (Square brackets indicate suggested deletions):
'([in] fitting with pre-historic men and deformed humans' ('in keeping' would be correct, but noy 'in fitting').
'don [on] your gorilla suits today' ('Don' means 'put on'; so your 'on' is redundent).
Adrian
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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This is such a calumny. OK, I can proudly boast the pot belly, but fail miserably in all other categories. I feel diminished . . . humiliated.
Great read. Well done.
Two SPAGs. (Square brackets indicate suggested deletions):
'([in] fitting with pre-historic men and deformed humans' ('in keeping' would be correct, but noy 'in fitting').
'don [on] your gorilla suits today' ('Don' means 'put on'; so your 'on' is redundent).
Adrian
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks for your kind review. So far, only two FS women have admitted the gorilla is handsome, but none want to trade their husbands in.
Women should heed this:
Consider your desires with care; chances are you might get it.
Nicole
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I had heard about this and checked out the gorilla's photos. For a gorilla, he's a looker, all right. For a gorilla. I don't see the attraction for human women, but the way things are going with men and women changing gender with surgery, perhaps changing species will be next. :)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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LOL! I had heard about this and checked out the gorilla's photos. For a gorilla, he's a looker, all right. For a gorilla. I don't see the attraction for human women, but the way things are going with men and women changing gender with surgery, perhaps changing species will be next. :)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I hope not, but one cannot trust society. Bestiality might be next on the social agenda. I have heard that it is practised in some places in Europe. Personally, I like intelligence in a man--and it took me a L O N G time to find that, so I won't be swapping!
Comment from tfawcus
Most entertaining and instructive! I shall have to stop shaving and start practising a bit of chest thumping in front of the bathroom mirror instead. Out with the Brut and in with the Brute! Grrr!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Most entertaining and instructive! I shall have to stop shaving and start practising a bit of chest thumping in front of the bathroom mirror instead. Out with the Brut and in with the Brute! Grrr!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Ridiculous, isn't it? Thanks for your fun review.
Nicole
Comment from c_lucas
King Kong proved that size matters. A little too much overkill. Remember in the late 1900's, "it's not the size, but how it is used." This is still the status quo for today. Your post is very well written
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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King Kong proved that size matters. A little too much overkill. Remember in the late 1900's, "it's not the size, but how it is used." This is still the status quo for today. Your post is very well written
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Well, you must be right, seeing that some crazy women are finding gorillas attractive. Thanks, Charlie.
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You're welcome, Nicole. Charlie
Comment from CR Delport
Oh my. Thank you for the hearty laugh. I needed that. Not something I am attracted to, but to each their own, right :) Very well written, Nicole. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Oh my. Thank you for the hearty laugh. I needed that. Not something I am attracted to, but to each their own, right :) Very well written, Nicole. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Agreed. Gorilla is not on my menu. Thanks.
Comment from Jay Squires
Very clever, Nicole. Just as well you made the comments here. I don't think they'd have made the cut at CNN. LOL, small penis, huh?
Monkeys and apes are cute, they are humanlike and entertaining to watch. [Either you need an "and" before they, or you need punctuation other than a comma, since it is a run-on sentence.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Very clever, Nicole. Just as well you made the comments here. I don't think they'd have made the cut at CNN. LOL, small penis, huh?
Monkeys and apes are cute, they are humanlike and entertaining to watch. [Either you need an "and" before they, or you need punctuation other than a comma, since it is a run-on sentence.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks for catching the spag, Jay.
Comment from Chris Tee
Well well this is a rather interesting piece you have written here. To some ladies the attributes are not as important as the way in which the deed is performed. I think the primitive way was rather unromantic. How would you feel it I drag you by your hair and then sort of just jump and do the deed. I like the info and say well done with this excellent write girl.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Well well this is a rather interesting piece you have written here. To some ladies the attributes are not as important as the way in which the deed is performed. I think the primitive way was rather unromantic. How would you feel it I drag you by your hair and then sort of just jump and do the deed. I like the info and say well done with this excellent write girl.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Chris. If I had wanted a gorilla, I would have found one!
My husband is everything which a gorilla is not, thank goodness, making me a lucky girl.
This is a tongue-in-cheek commentary of CNN's news report which made big news in countries which don't really have much to say. Ridiculous--but there you have it.
Nicole
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a cute list write, curly, your numbers for the list are embedded in the picture that you have. I enjoyed reading this list. I like a man with a hairy chest and stomach. just don't put hair on their back, lol
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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this is a cute list write, curly, your numbers for the list are embedded in the picture that you have. I enjoyed reading this list. I like a man with a hairy chest and stomach. just don't put hair on their back, lol
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Sweetwoodjax. I have tried to change the numbering. I hope it is better now.
Nicole
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good fix
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Thanks
Comment from royowen
Well done Nicole, I must admit my maleness is diminishing as I age. So I'll just soak up the atmosphere and then I'll go and have a nap, all this activity is making me weary! Well done, I think watching a male gorilla "perform" will probably send me for a full blown sleep, well done, nicely written and formatted, I'm off for a nap. Blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Well done Nicole, I must admit my maleness is diminishing as I age. So I'll just soak up the atmosphere and then I'll go and have a nap, all this activity is making me weary! Well done, I think watching a male gorilla "perform" will probably send me for a full blown sleep, well done, nicely written and formatted, I'm off for a nap. Blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Roy. Sleep well.
Nicole
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Heh, heh,
