The Wonder
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Comment from livelylinda
They just keep getting better, Michael. Yours words are softer now; the music more peaceful. Go play in your Meadow . . . soft Thunder
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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They just keep getting better, Michael. Yours words are softer now; the music more peaceful. Go play in your Meadow . . . soft Thunder
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hey Thunder...-smile- ah soft spreads from the head...lol...yea, I like soft to sometimes. So my best friends coming to see you tomorrow...hope you guys have fun...-smile- stay out of Chippindales...-wink-....love you Michael
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We always stay out of trouble but we laugh so hard I have to take Nitro to ease the chest pains!
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We always stay out of trouble but we laugh so hard I have to take Nitro to ease the chest pains!
Comment from MizKat
Hi Michael,
This is a very interesting poem that is nicely written and interesting to read. Sorry I haven't been reading your poetry as often as I should. I've been having health problems so I don't get around much anymore.
Keep writing, my Son, Mom
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi Michael,
This is a very interesting poem that is nicely written and interesting to read. Sorry I haven't been reading your poetry as often as I should. I've been having health problems so I don't get around much anymore.
Keep writing, my Son, Mom
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hey Mom...-smile- ah no worries....I don't have a lot of time anymore either Mom. I'm sorry to hear that your feeling poorly. Do you want me to tickle your feet...? -smile- ah Mom...getting old sucks no doubt about it...its a consistent we all can count on. I don't care how many times you sing "Gravity"...ha ha....love you Michael
Comment from hannahorion
When she dreams pure magic happens. The imagery in this poem is both stark and subtle at the same time. Like Cinderella magic happens at the toss of her hair and where she rests wheat fields wave welcome and pure sincerity reigns. Some of the imagery is not straightforward but rather forces the reader to think about what has just been read but there is no rush in this as we discover its peace is the poetic hush of the scene. A very well thought out poem.
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When she dreams pure magic happens. The imagery in this poem is both stark and subtle at the same time. Like Cinderella magic happens at the toss of her hair and where she rests wheat fields wave welcome and pure sincerity reigns. Some of the imagery is not straightforward but rather forces the reader to think about what has just been read but there is no rush in this as we discover its peace is the poetic hush of the scene. A very well thought out poem.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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yes Sir thats a true story...-smile- I thank you kindly sir...appreciate ya.....love Michael
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This poem was a pleasure to read and think about.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I know when I read your work that I am going to get something different, challenging, thought provoking and undeniably beautifully written.
This had an almost magical quality to it. Not disappointed!
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi there,
I know when I read your work that I am going to get something different, challenging, thought provoking and undeniably beautifully written.
This had an almost magical quality to it. Not disappointed!
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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haha...-smile- thank you Sir...and congratulations to you are in order...tipped hat acknowledged...well I hope she likes it...will see. love Michael
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Michael, great imagery presented in these tercets, great use of alliteration
as well. I enjoyed reading this one. love the picture
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this is an excellent write, Michael, great imagery presented in these tercets, great use of alliteration
as well. I enjoyed reading this one. love the picture
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hello Pam...-smile- well thank you, I wrote it for a friend...I have to sing her a song next...-wink-...who knows maybe it'll go "viral" Joan taught me that word...some record label will get wind of it and I wont have to live like this anymore....lol ahh thank you Dear....love Michael
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow! This so imaginative. You paint such a beautiful picture of her dreams. The word choices are perfect. The flow of the poem is wonderful. A very creative and well written poem.
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Wow! This so imaginative. You paint such a beautiful picture of her dreams. The word choices are perfect. The flow of the poem is wonderful. A very creative and well written poem.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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lol...ah how ironic that you should be my first guest Michael...ahh thank you Sir...I'm a fan of hers myself...well when she dreams we all benefit. thanks again Sir....love michael
