The Wonder
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Comment from frogbook
To tell you the truth romance poems are not usually a favorite of mine, but yours are always on another level, on a higher plane it seems. They are so authentic and flow with a natural and true feeling. Very lovely.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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To tell you the truth romance poems are not usually a favorite of mine, but yours are always on another level, on a higher plane it seems. They are so authentic and flow with a natural and true feeling. Very lovely.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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well i romance what seems to be a stone so...I have to work a lil' harder...-wink-....haha...thank you Dear for indeed it is compliment. love to you...michael
Comment from Lena Borghi
Beautiful thoughts on love in this inspiring free verse poem. My favorite lines are the last three:
"love is life worshiping in the glory of morning
cart wheeling the gift
love is us"
Awesome ending. Thanks for sharing.
Lena
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Beautiful thoughts on love in this inspiring free verse poem. My favorite lines are the last three:
"love is life worshiping in the glory of morning
cart wheeling the gift
love is us"
Awesome ending. Thanks for sharing.
Lena
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Hi Lena...-smile-
yea that came in perfect time. appreciate you enjoting it with me. love to you...michael
Comment from honeytree
Love is a very special
word for us all everyday
of our lives.
We remember and keep
memories of loving times
within our lives and hold onto them.
Honeytree
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Love is a very special
word for us all everyday
of our lives.
We remember and keep
memories of loving times
within our lives and hold onto them.
Honeytree
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, what beauty that rests in this poem! The alliteration adds to the beauty and flow of your words.
I love your approach to love. We should all adhere.
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Wow, what beauty that rests in this poem! The alliteration adds to the beauty and flow of your words.
I love your approach to love. We should all adhere.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
Comment from Leineco
Sparks must be struck - for a fire to start. . . this is what your poem
reminds me of.
Sparks flung out as carbon strikes flint - kernels of fire waiting to catch.
Each line offered the promise of enlightenment, if encouraged to kindle.
Slowly, but surely, a roaring blaze of love and life will result. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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Sparks must be struck - for a fire to start. . . this is what your poem
reminds me of.
Sparks flung out as carbon strikes flint - kernels of fire waiting to catch.
Each line offered the promise of enlightenment, if encouraged to kindle.
Slowly, but surely, a roaring blaze of love and life will result. :-)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2016
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hm...and here I thought the enlightenment was "love is...us"
well let me go douse myself in gasoline just in case.. your right....-smile-....thank you dear. love Michael
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love of life
love of my life
love throughout life
love lost then found
love blooming true
gratitude for life and love
;-) a thousand little flames ignited
Comment from DR DIP
very well constructed free verse reconciled i really thought this was well written.
great use of poetic tools like metaphors and similes Thankyou for posting
dip
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very well constructed free verse reconciled i really thought this was well written.
great use of poetic tools like metaphors and similes Thankyou for posting
dip
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poem is excellent. I did find one error. In the second stanza, "tommorows" should have an apostrophe. It is possessive.
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Your poem is excellent. I did find one error. In the second stanza, "tommorows" should have an apostrophe. It is possessive.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
Comment from TPAC
Love definitely has its defining under each conception of its potential. Yet the greatest aspect is to care for someone who doesn't even know you: my God's love.
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Love definitely has its defining under each conception of its potential. Yet the greatest aspect is to care for someone who doesn't even know you: my God's love.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
Comment from Neonewman
Another outstanding piece you have delivered my friend. I found so much joy from this piece.
Loved these lines.
love is life worshipping in the glory of morning
cart wheeling the gift
love is us
God bless!
Steve
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Another outstanding piece you have delivered my friend. I found so much joy from this piece.
Loved these lines.
love is life worshipping in the glory of morning
cart wheeling the gift
love is us
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
Comment from johnwilson
This is absolutely haunting and, as the music builds, so does the poem hitting the crescendo of "love is us". Fellow writer, I think this is my favorite poem so far because of the beautiful metaphors and similes used as well as the way the poem builds and ends. The lack of punctuation allows the reader to absorb it at their own pace. The lack of rhyme here increases the intensity and passion. Bravo!
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This is absolutely haunting and, as the music builds, so does the poem hitting the crescendo of "love is us". Fellow writer, I think this is my favorite poem so far because of the beautiful metaphors and similes used as well as the way the poem builds and ends. The lack of punctuation allows the reader to absorb it at their own pace. The lack of rhyme here increases the intensity and passion. Bravo!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2016
