Act of Endurance
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Comment from richie m
Like you I just hope for
a small place inside the gate
front gate could be ok
could help me spot new
arrivals who might be friends
or acquaintances.-- good ,thoughtful,writing--dm
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Like you I just hope for
a small place inside the gate
front gate could be ok
could help me spot new
arrivals who might be friends
or acquaintances.-- good ,thoughtful,writing--dm
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Yeah. The thought of 144,000 as premitted; my interests were of those within gates: Abraham, Jacob, David and head of city the Groom. Man what a gathering of great ones. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments about this write.
Comment from foxangie123
This could not have been better said in my opinion. It shows your intellect and insight into people and this world. It is truly one everybody should read. Fantastic.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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This could not have been better said in my opinion. It shows your intellect and insight into people and this world. It is truly one everybody should read. Fantastic.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Wow, you have allot of sun shine, glad you beamed some of that light my way. Thanking you for generous rate and pleasing to me comments.
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Wonderful Writing. Xo
Comment from Ricky1024
very true indeed these powerful words the lack of religion in United States incredibly growing in the worst in the world according to the article I read in the awake and based on the seven morals of judification at the 7th being lack of religion the first being addictions it seems our world has been spinning backwards Nelson 2911 incident and I say these words in the name of Ricky 10:24 and Jesus Christ and be sure to catch my latest shedatear fairytale in Fable called Charlie the Greenhead fly thanks
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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very true indeed these powerful words the lack of religion in United States incredibly growing in the worst in the world according to the article I read in the awake and based on the seven morals of judification at the 7th being lack of religion the first being addictions it seems our world has been spinning backwards Nelson 2911 incident and I say these words in the name of Ricky 10:24 and Jesus Christ and be sure to catch my latest shedatear fairytale in Fable called Charlie the Greenhead fly thanks
Comment Written 26-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Glad this write found some appeal with you. Not much in religion but do love the Holy Text. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments about this work.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I read another of your poems just before this one. Your writing is thought inspiring and give the reader something to think about. I enjoy reading your work.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Excellent. I read another of your poems just before this one. Your writing is thought inspiring and give the reader something to think about. I enjoy reading your work.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016
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Appreciate your input upon my works, glad you find them sort of pleasing to you. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements.
Comment from Joyce Long
I agree everyone needs Faith. I am surprised that you found no one giving time to God. In reading for FanStory, I have found several who have a love of God. I would agree that very few people spend enough time in time with God. You are right when prayer seems to be some form of asking. Therefore, we need to add praise to our prayers.
Very well done.
Joyce 11-16-15
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I agree everyone needs Faith. I am surprised that you found no one giving time to God. In reading for FanStory, I have found several who have a love of God. I would agree that very few people spend enough time in time with God. You are right when prayer seems to be some form of asking. Therefore, we need to add praise to our prayers.
Very well done.
Joyce 11-16-15
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I as stated try not to bother the Father with my concerns, but this statement my first outside of my closet which within I held just a few. Glad some of these thoughts you found touching in some reality to you. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed encouragements in all my writes.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Great piece. Your imagery and figurative language was spot on. The words flowed well and the somber tone of the poem was perfect. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Great piece. Your imagery and figurative language was spot on. The words flowed well and the somber tone of the poem was perfect. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Glad this write found appeal to you. Thanking you for generous rate and touching statements disclosing this work.
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful Sabbath Prayer! Many lines resonate with the reader:
"I pray unto the heavens
For peace on earth today"
"I pray I grow in wisdom truth
Not me being lost in uncertainties"
"Wishing to be inside at least at the rear
Of the arrival of the new city gate"
Marilyn/BeasPeas
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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A wonderful Sabbath Prayer! Many lines resonate with the reader:
"I pray unto the heavens
For peace on earth today"
"I pray I grow in wisdom truth
Not me being lost in uncertainties"
"Wishing to be inside at least at the rear
Of the arrival of the new city gate"
Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thanking you for warm comments capturing my hopes which you have focused very generous rate
Comment from petalangela
As non practising Christian who craved God In her life and nothin happened I thought this prayer was truly magnificent
Yes I prayed yes I had faith yes I believed. Not that it helped. He never arrived. I do believe there is God but I also know I am not a chosen ne sigh.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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As non practising Christian who craved God In her life and nothin happened I thought this prayer was truly magnificent
Yes I prayed yes I had faith yes I believed. Not that it helped. He never arrived. I do believe there is God but I also know I am not a chosen ne sigh.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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Don't kick yourself too hard, a lot of proclaimed believers can say worst than you, keep the faith when you need it maybe then it will glow Thanking you delightful comments and generous rate
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, tpac, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful prayer of faith and understanding, wonderful imagery presented here. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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this is an excellent write, tpac, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful prayer of faith and understanding, wonderful imagery presented here. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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Glad you found interest in this work, the first of personals, thanks for wonderful encouragements and generous rate
