Act of Endurance
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Comment from royowen
I agree wholeheartedly, we need belief, else one will turn to drugs, booze, gambling, (as I did, before God revealed Himself). I honestly don't know how one can have faith in science, riches, power, or any earthbound thing, and be satisfied! Well my friend, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Typo : I pray (to) for? Heaven(')s happiness.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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I agree wholeheartedly, we need belief, else one will turn to drugs, booze, gambling, (as I did, before God revealed Himself). I honestly don't know how one can have faith in science, riches, power, or any earthbound thing, and be satisfied! Well my friend, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Typo : I pray (to) for? Heaven(')s happiness.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
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Thanks for heads up, most of my writes suffering such pits. Thanking you for your generous rate and helpful assist views.
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Most welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about need of Sabbath prayer and hopes for making the path to living easy and convenient keeping faith in prayer and its righteous fruition feeling in endurance; I liked.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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This speaks about need of Sabbath prayer and hopes for making the path to living easy and convenient keeping faith in prayer and its righteous fruition feeling in endurance; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Yeah. Also being counted as one of the 144,000 to enter the new city. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC
I will say you have a very goof way of using internal rhyme to keep my interest going to read of how saying a nightly prayer
asking God for urgent needs,
trusting His kindness to seed a dream, must for world gifts by deeds.
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Hello TPAC
I will say you have a very goof way of using internal rhyme to keep my interest going to read of how saying a nightly prayer
asking God for urgent needs,
trusting His kindness to seed a dream, must for world gifts by deeds.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Baby steps still learning grammar, alot of soft shoe. Thanking you for your generous rate and delighting comments.
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You are welcome TPAC
Gert
Comment from schatzling
EXCELLENT WRITING.
BRAVO.....BRAVO....
I enjoyed reading your words which flow so easily....which are so TRUE in every aspect of the word. WOW....
I am humbled you chose my artwork to accompany your writing.
They do go so well together.
Thank you ever so much.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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EXCELLENT WRITING.
BRAVO.....BRAVO....
I enjoyed reading your words which flow so easily....which are so TRUE in every aspect of the word. WOW....
I am humbled you chose my artwork to accompany your writing.
They do go so well together.
Thank you ever so much.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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I thank you. Not just for your encouraging thoughts and generous rate, but your given expression.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Thank you for this inspirational post.
This is particularly poignant:
I in form same as them, all in aims to do best, I rule / myself handling my woes: me all times paused to die.
If only everyone would follow that wise sentiment.
And this is very evocative:
Love heard through hills roam heights, it venture valleys: unions producing babies crying as reaps.
The power of love throughout Mother Nature and the happiness it brings.
Thank you for brightening my day :-)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Thank you for this inspirational post.
This is particularly poignant:
I in form same as them, all in aims to do best, I rule / myself handling my woes: me all times paused to die.
If only everyone would follow that wise sentiment.
And this is very evocative:
Love heard through hills roam heights, it venture valleys: unions producing babies crying as reaps.
The power of love throughout Mother Nature and the happiness it brings.
Thank you for brightening my day :-)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Just happy my consistent flaws in my write are lessen. That my intents are slowly being exposed to their wanted potentials. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating views about this work.
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My pleasure :-)
Comment from KyColonel Randal
I see in answer to my earlier question the similarities between poems in the book "Endurance." Your style is somewhat cryptic and abstract relative to other poems I am presented to review here, but that is not altogether uncommon, especially among those writers who favor free verse. I can see you put a lot of thought into your poems, and I wonder if you find as I do extreme value to your mental health in the act of creating poetry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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I see in answer to my earlier question the similarities between poems in the book "Endurance." Your style is somewhat cryptic and abstract relative to other poems I am presented to review here, but that is not altogether uncommon, especially among those writers who favor free verse. I can see you put a lot of thought into your poems, and I wonder if you find as I do extreme value to your mental health in the act of creating poetry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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I'm crazy as a bed bug, but please these conveyances does cause reactions in others holding some degree of interests. Thanking you for generous rate and touching sentiments.
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
Your writing keeps popping up this morning. This was also very enjoyable. The subject matter was well defined. You do have a unique style of writing that allows the reader to 'form' an even deeper meaning behind your words.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Your writing keeps popping up this morning. This was also very enjoyable. The subject matter was well defined. You do have a unique style of writing that allows the reader to 'form' an even deeper meaning behind your words.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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This was my hope as a beginner. Aims had 50-50 results, bad gammar pits. I'm still working on my writes pits. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements.
Comment from Shelli 1
The is a very honest poem full of humility and the frailty of human nature and I feel that God knows we are mere dust and without Him we can do nothing and His endless forgiveness hHe helps to grow closure to Him, growing from the inside out and even in death he doesn't forsake us Great read
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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The is a very honest poem full of humility and the frailty of human nature and I feel that God knows we are mere dust and without Him we can do nothing and His endless forgiveness hHe helps to grow closure to Him, growing from the inside out and even in death he doesn't forsake us Great read
Comment Written 29-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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David stated even in hell You shall hear me, or something like that: the statement really touched me. Hope my writes continue to touch as well in a positive. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from c_lucas
Ask and you shall receive. He promises that we will not be alone. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Ask and you shall receive. He promises that we will not be alone. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Glad this work found appeal, even thou gh I still think pits: my common faults. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a creative and interesting write. You express your thoughts so well. Very creative and well written. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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I thought this was a creative and interesting write. You express your thoughts so well. Very creative and well written. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Glad to hear these thoughts, mostly serving my writes with pits: pleased the few there didn't flaw intents. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating conveyances.
