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Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "Differences make the Difference"
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Comment from Luvs2rite4u
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This poem of indifference was woven as fine silk. The centering, picture, and the magnitude of your choice of word usage and rhyming skills unearthed a beautiful poem. I enjoyed your poem very much. I saw no errors. You seemed to have written with your heart and soul. Your poem touched me in a very special way.
Thank you. Good Luck.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review and six star rating I do write from my heart and Hopefully that's what's. reflected in my work. You have made my day with your beautiful and encouraging words. A big hug Cheers Christine😀😀
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review and six star rating I do write from my heart and Hopefully that's what's. reflected in my work. You have made my day with your beautiful and encouraging words. A big hug Cheers Christine😀😀
Comment from Terry wrote
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I love your poem, and write my own.
I love the colors you've chosen, too.
I tend to stay with purples and blue
They often fit the mood.
Thanks for sharing this poem with all of us.
A little bit of fun is true!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015
    Thank you Terry for you great review, how true, for me and you , that purple and blue have such a hue. How much fun is this site, I could stay on it all night, but need to get out of bed, I too much to do instead. Thanks Again Terry for stopping by appreciate you fun review. Cheers Christine
Comment from Louise Michelle
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This is so cute and very true - opposites do attract. In my case, it's because I need the balance of a conservative husband because I'm so flaky. A fun read. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015
    Thank you Louise, for your time to read and review my poem and yes it is fun with an opposite, we do quite well and he is the quiet one, and I am a bit more out there and at times can be very flaky ( I call myself a bit ditsy) Glad you liked it Cheers Christine😃
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is a cute write, mystery writer, I don't think you can get anymore opposite than this, lol. this made me smile as I read it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
    Thank you sweetwoodjax for your comments and review and rating . Yes we are pretty opposite but that's what makes it work .thanks also for your good luck contest wishes.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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The most important line, I think, is "I know that you love me." We can abide with a lot of differences when we know that. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
    Thank you Jeanie for your review and comments, yes despite the differences we are still in love 41 years later not bad hey. Thanks for your time to read this entry.
Comment from writeapoem
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I enjoyed your poem and you proved opposites can fall and stay in love. My wife is quite I'm a country boy she is a city girl. I have loved her 44 years. It is indeed a fact Opposites attracts.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
    Thanks you writeapoem for stopping by to have a read of my poem and as much as we are opposites in lots of things we gel well and also have been married 41 years Cheers from a country girl
Comment from seaglass
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This has great rhymes carrying along the message of how opposites can appreciate one another. It doesn't always work like that...it truly takes respecting the other person's right to be different but when that's in place, how wonderful it can be,

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thanks sea glass for your time to review and give me feedback .It is often the opposite things that make a good marriage work we have one so thanks again Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
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How true. We try to acquire what we don't have by getting it in a partner. Success depends on compromise. You may want to correct: "I love a (eliminate "a") big red roses. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thank you Marilyn for your review and comments, and yes I will fix this error so thanks for pointing it out . Sometimes it is the opposites that liven things up and we have fun .Cheers
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi...

_ Indeed, you're right, opposites are far better than the same boring, know what to expect type. (*<*)
_ Great entry.
_ Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thanks Jax for your read and review and comments and indeed opposite are more fun. cheers C
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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You wrote an interesting poem about you and your wife that you are different but you love eachother anyway. The color you chose for the background is too bright and the font too hard to read. I would make it black and bold or white.
Good job

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
    Thanks you Gypsy Blue Rose for your comments and suggestions, re the colour sometimes it takes another reader to see what should be obvious. I'll send what I can do. Appreciate your comments Cheers C