Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I find the didactic cinquain a good teaching tool for school children, but you harnessed it into an enjoyable ditty with your focus on the "Bait"! You even managed to include abundant alliteration. Applause- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you Joan. Im glad you got hooked and i caught you.

reply by Joan E. on 26-Jun-2015

Thanks for another laugh before bedtime--sweet dreams- J

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

This time not my favourite subject. Have to thank you once again for the interesting poem form and images to go with. Thank you also for the detailed description on the poem's form, it helps a lot.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Thank you Sandra, and your're welcome.

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

lol,
actually, the chicken liver and the dreaded 'stink bait'
seems to be working very well on the catfish here
down on the dock at the moment. lol

They pulled in five last night and brought them home...
skinned, gutted, and put them in the freezer...
(cook them outside please?)

yeah... so I suppose I know what's for dinner tonight)
He's found a way to cook them gluten free, dairy and egg
free... and so, if we eat them early in the evening they
seem to be heartburn free as well) lol

Want to come for dinner?

I had to smile and also, to share you Cinquain with the boys...
and it brought a smile.
Also, your lure was much more attractive than their
'stink bait' or chicken livers, I must say.

(thank goodness for that)
;)
Cat

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Thank you Cat. Indeed, my son-in-law was using stink bait and pulled in about 4 large carp. My grandson an I were catching sheepheads, bass, and sunfish.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. I find these Cinquains with word count a lot easier. And I think we all know worms make good bait for some fish.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Thank you Ine for your review and comments. May your week be blessed.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Treischel: Well done! Thanks for the notes on how this is written. Now, that you have the wriggly worms: twisting, turning, squirming, are you going fishing? Do you catch the walleye or perch? Have a fun filled Fourth of July fishing with your family in Minn-es-ooota! We will be in Denver to celebrate my daughter's 21st birthday with family. My brother and I used to fish with my dad. I got to clean these fish!
Good memories of these worms! Have fun with your bait! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Thank you for this wonderful review and for sharing your thoughts. Yes, I did go fishing and we ever caught fish.