Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 273 "Sunrise"Small and Specialty Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine Mirror Cinquain poem
Syllable are exact in the stated pattern
Rhyme pattern is very interesting and effective
But it's the descriptive images that set it apart
Even without the excellent photograph
You can picture the sunbeam glimmering on the lake
A perfect Father's day morning
Well done
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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This is a fine Mirror Cinquain poem
Syllable are exact in the stated pattern
Rhyme pattern is very interesting and effective
But it's the descriptive images that set it apart
Even without the excellent photograph
You can picture the sunbeam glimmering on the lake
A perfect Father's day morning
Well done
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you rspoet. It was a wonderful day.
Comment from ellie6
A charming poem. the illustration complements it beautifully. To go fishing at dawn and to watch the sunrise is a very special thing, never lose slght of that beauty.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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A charming poem. the illustration complements it beautifully. To go fishing at dawn and to watch the sunrise is a very special thing, never lose slght of that beauty.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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Thank you Ellie. Very good advice.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a sweet poem and I hope you had a good day fishing. I find the sport a bit boring, but I think it is a man and son thing. A bond between the generation gap so to speak. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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This is a sweet poem and I hope you had a good day fishing. I find the sport a bit boring, but I think it is a man and son thing. A bond between the generation gap so to speak. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you DMT.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Tom, that is a beautiful poem and a beautiful photo to go with it. I think you had a really lovely Father's Day from the sounds of it. I am really pleased for you. This was a pleasure to read and view, :) Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Tom, that is a beautiful poem and a beautiful photo to go with it. I think you had a really lovely Father's Day from the sounds of it. I am really pleased for you. This was a pleasure to read and view, :) Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sandra. It was great.
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Magnificent majestic scenery. Words are as good as picture. Appreciate the author notes. Nice shot! Fishing in the morning is the best. The explanations help. Tendrils of light Nice. Count your doubloon. wackydo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Magnificent majestic scenery. Words are as good as picture. Appreciate the author notes. Nice shot! Fishing in the morning is the best. The explanations help. Tendrils of light Nice. Count your doubloon. wackydo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you Wackydo.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a gorgeous poem! I have never used this form, but the way you have it flows so beautifully, so naturally - it is easy to 'see' this tranquil scene. The reader is 'drinking in' that lovely sunrise with you! I wish I had a six for this, but these will have to do, I'm afraid - ***********************EXCEPTIONAL******************
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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What a gorgeous poem! I have never used this form, but the way you have it flows so beautifully, so naturally - it is easy to 'see' this tranquil scene. The reader is 'drinking in' that lovely sunrise with you! I wish I had a six for this, but these will have to do, I'm afraid - ***********************EXCEPTIONAL******************
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Dawn. I appreciate the sentiment.
Comment from artemis53
How very beautiful. Not only is the picture appropriate but the words have a life of their own. Together they make quite a stunning presentation.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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How very beautiful. Not only is the picture appropriate but the words have a life of their own. Together they make quite a stunning presentation.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from Joan E.
The cinquain is one of my favorite forms, since it is succinct but gives more space than short Japanese form. I enjoyed your mirrored version and your addition of rhymes that is a extra challenge. Thank you for sharing the spectacular sunrise with us both in your photograph and verse. Your alliteration of "g's" added to the intensity. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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The cinquain is one of my favorite forms, since it is succinct but gives more space than short Japanese form. I enjoyed your mirrored version and your addition of rhymes that is a extra challenge. Thank you for sharing the spectacular sunrise with us both in your photograph and verse. Your alliteration of "g's" added to the intensity. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Joan. It is a fabulous format.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
An interesting form of poetry, like a reflection on water. Beautiful photo as well, inspiration for the poem. My favourite subject is sunrises and sunsets. Thank you for the beautiful words
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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An interesting form of poetry, like a reflection on water. Beautiful photo as well, inspiration for the poem. My favourite subject is sunrises and sunsets. Thank you for the beautiful words
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I thought they were together well, form and theme.
Comment from Nosha17
What a lovely picture of a sunrise, the best time of the day and a most fitting time to go fishing. Nice imagery, well chosen words and good use of rhyming to convey your thoughts. Most enjoyable. Hope you caught some good fish. Faye
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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What a lovely picture of a sunrise, the best time of the day and a most fitting time to go fishing. Nice imagery, well chosen words and good use of rhyming to convey your thoughts. Most enjoyable. Hope you caught some good fish. Faye
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you Faye. Indeed we got about 9 altogether.
