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I am what I am,my thoughts, my words,my poems

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Comment from petalangela
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Love is cruel it is capricious. Even when it settles like the dust in a wind storm it can be gone in a moment leaving you worse off than you were before

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
    thanks for your comments
Comment from sebe
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there is a good idea behind this poem, though the idea I see is not what you mean. it is important to understand that love is not always here. sometimes that is a wake up call. and then we start work those difficult issues so that we could love again. your poem is beautiful, I like it very much.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
    thanks for your comments