Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

I want to join, so sign me up. I hate having to watch what you say and not being able to tell a funny joke for fear of insulting someone. This kind of crap makes kids discriminate. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015

Gladly sign you up, it's nice to find people that feel the same way, and I fear for our freedom and future. Thank you for reading and sending me a review and a great rating I really appreciate it See you at the rally lol Thanks again Cheers Christine😀

Comment from Walu Feral

Exceptional

Hahahaha! G'day Christine, that is perfect and perfect on so many levels, you are a brilliant poet and take a bow for me missy! OOPS! I mean woman LOL. I called Julia Gillard "Girly" last year, that went down like a led balloon. Very well done mate...

One sugestion but tell me to bugger off if you want...

"We live in this great country (of) ours, quite multicultural too"

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015

Thank you Fez for your great review and the Sixer I am so glad you liked it . I had fun writing this one and what an honour for you to tell me I am a brilliant poet wow 😀 coming from you that's makes me so happy as I admire your work so much. Julia really is a girly though lol .Thanks for suggestion to that line . Cheers mate Christine😄

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Sadly what you call foolish, or silly, may not be to some...if it bothers you don't use any of it...There's no punishment for not doing so...

This was a long well written poem...I saw no spag..

Regards,
Victoria

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Thank you mrsmajor for reading, reviewing and your support .Cheers Christine

reply by mrsmajor on 16-Jun-2015

You're welcome!

Comment from Linda Kay

Exceptional

Love this! Apparently common sense has been replaced by political correctness in your country too! I would definitely join your party and could point you towards some groups and people to set straight! Thanks for an amusing piece to read.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Thanks you Linda Kay for reading this and your great rating. I am so glad you thought it so worthy and oh yes the old PC is alive and well everywhere . I would be very pleased so give you membership lol perhaps what starts out as a joke may end up serious . With thanks again Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very good poem with good rhyme, examples, and good flow.
-You get points across very well. I thought some of our rules were weird, no "Baa, Baa, Black Sheep?! Has there been been a rush to censure fairy tails and all the kid's stories, like Cinderella, etc.?!
-Very good first stanza.
-I like this line:
"I like Queen Lizzy and her clan, and all their family fuss."
- I like your "party incorrect".
-The last two stanzas end the poem nicely.
-A couple of small things:
* "For Gods sake" (God's)
* what I do propose" (I think if you took out the do, the line would have a better meter)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Thank you respa1 for having a read and reviewing this. Not sure what is going on but seems PC is everywhere and it makes me a little mad at times, glad you liked my attempt and thanks for the suggestions. As always appreciate you help and support Cheers Christine😄

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Jun-2015

You are very welcome. Poetry is really good when your topic really means something to you.

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Yes it make the words flow Cheers

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I love the picture, it is so funny! I enjoyed reading your poem. Good rhyme and even flow. Excellent word choice to enhance the theme.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for having a look and yes I thought the picture was a great one for this piece. It does one good to. Glad you enjoyed my words Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Christine!

_ Love this! Love this! Six star love this!
_ Why is it, the minority seems to be dictating to the majority? Grrrrr.
_ Such great points you made. Super job, my friend.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

Thank you Jax for you great review and 6 stars. We obvious feel the same way about all the ridiculous things 'society' tells us to now do and say. So. I kept saying I was going to write about it and here it is. Perhaps another one may follow. ( there is enough material) Appreciate you reding and reviewing my work .Cheers Christine😄

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I totally agree with you, it drives me round the bend, too. My kids and I were all brought up on Enid Blyton and Noddy, and we are all quite normal, decent human beings. Excellent rhyming and imagery-good to highlight the stupidity of all this Political Correct nonsense. Most enjoyable. Faye

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

Thanks Faye for reading and reviewing my latest effort. It does get a bit much doesn't it . I had fun writing this and wonder just what will be the next PC to put up with I think it's time to say enough appreciate your support Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Jean Lutz

Exceptional

When it comes to rants
this is by far the best.
We, the people, are speaking
will any candidate pass the test?

Your selected artwork is perfect -- the model in the pants suit has enjoyed 'way too much pork!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

Thank Jean I hope I have hit a chord with the readers, and I enjoy a good rant, and any candidate is welcome. thanks for your great rating and review. I' lol post out a form lol Cheers Christine😀

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

So it's happening there too. I had hoped the rest of western world wasn't under attack like America but it seems so. I fear it's more than PC, but did well in how you addressed it here, well done.

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015

thanks Lancelot for stopping by to have a read and comment appreciate your feedback. And yes PC seems to be everywhere, it actually makes me laugh now when I here the latest nonsense but I thought it worthy to have a rave Cheers Christine😃