Comment from Mary H-W

Excellent

Interesting and imaginative
My thought waves and yours seem to be on very different planes,
but that's what makes the world such a diverse place
I'm glad that you put your ideas out there for all to interpret in our own way

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Hi Mary....-smile-...ahh well thank you very much....yes thought waves unpredictable....I think of some strange things in the dammdest of places....someone recently suggested that if I were to quit writing I'd devolp terret syndrom....i just -headshook-....and hid the fact I've already a slight form in traffic....-smile-...ahh well thank you dear Lady....love Michael

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

No wonder lraven asked me what we had for lunch today! No "catch and release" for us--we ate salmon. LOL I again enjoyed your form--the tercets and repeated first stanza. Your "choreographed wings my soul" is memorable, as is the artwork. Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

yes maam shes into a lil' of everything aint she...? smile- Hey J.......salmon, yea I used to eat that every once in a while...with jasmine rice...-wink-....thank you maam.....love Michael

reply by Joan E. on 10-Jun-2015

Fish and its omega 3 is good for us--try to have it twice a week. Sweet dreams- Doc. Joan

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

its not bad really...in fact its really good. anyway...yes Doc....I'll try,...-smile- have a good night...love-