Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Foiled again it must be because the stupid woman just would not sit still. Never mind the next one may be more accepting of your heinous methods

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Yeah, right? (LOL)
Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Petal. Me and all of the other wonderful writers involved deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hmm, I'm guessing there's no second date on the books for these two. First, he's apparently not the loyal type, and secondly, he's just not the guy she's "looking" for. Oh, well, at least he found her attractive...well in a creepy/cut your face off, sort of way.
Take care, Faye, I mean, Dean,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Rhonda. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 13-Jun-2015

They are really fun. I try to keep up with the "others", but only chance upon them when reviewing.
Rhonda

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Good enough. I (we) are/am grateful for the support. These stories seem to be fairly well received, for the most part.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 13-Jun-2015

Good for all of you. I'm afraid I suck at horror, as can be seen from my Ghost story. Sorry to hear what happened to yours. I thought it was brilliant.

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks. :)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Who borrowed the guy's face-Hannibal Lector? Gory stuff, this. And written clearly, cleanly and well. Sounds like a horror story fit for a collection. Excellent.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Red. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support. ~Dean

Comment from giftsun

Excellent

Heh, heh, heh. Your ghoulish writing pulls me in every time. In seeing pictures, not writing, so vivid are the pictures you paint with your work. Fantastic work my scary friend.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, giftsun. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

A gruesome, twisted one sided take. I thought the running commentary worked in establishing the level of ego manifesto of this serial killer. It's all about him really, and excluding his victim as if listening in on a phone call really put the spotlight on him... or her, the pov could be a her.... in fact, it's kinda interesting to imagine the pov as a woman. Guys shouldn't collect dolls anyway

Even without the details from the victims perception, the violence is clear, and there is a bit of humor... twisted humor, in the irritation of the victim dying or at losing consciousness.

An easy entertaining read.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Turtlestage5. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

All this needs is the Cliff Richard song playing in the background!

Brilliant work, as always Dean, thanks for sharing.

Craig

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Craig. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A clever and ghoulish monologue. The narrator asks a question and then adds about the bloody wad in her mouth (how reminiscent of the dentist) Then the details to prepare the eyes to pop-out. The worst part is she's still alike, but of course, she'd go into shock and die or at least pass out. The macabre humor of changing her eye color and of course, the irony of "living doll."

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Shari. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another macabre post that the author has created with this piece of work. This is scary, but it is really good. Well done yet again.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015

Thanks again for reading and taking an interest in these short snippets of horror, Tomes. Me -- along with all of the other wonderful writers involved -- deeply appreciate your support.
~Dean

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

LOL LMAO. Good stuff, buddy. I loved this! Did you dothis on purpose by the way:

"w...and, 'POP!' -- out they come. It's as easy as that, you see? (eye out...See? LOL..I love it.

Crazy Guy. Thanks, Bob

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

You know me too well, Bob, I certainly did, lmao. Just consider this twisted tiny tale the dark comedy edition of Tiny Tales. I'm still hoping you'll submit your own horror story to our book...Tic, tock-Tic, tock...
Thanks for the review! ~Dean ;]

reply by Mastery on 10-Jun-2015

Sorry my friend...no time right now...really. Bob

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

No worries. I completely understand. Heck, I'm just about to that point myself, LOL...

reply by Mastery on 10-Jun-2015

I went to Chicago for the Tribune's Lit fest over the weekend. Haven't even started my next chapter....LOL...Bob

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Seriously?
You have a book of tiny tales of terror?
really?
oh my.
I must get in on this.
lol
This is... terrifying...
I think i would have let you kill me FIRST.
wow.
You're so.... C R E E P Y

I guess that just makes me....
yeah, I find you fascinating. LOLOL
wow.
This was... I couldn't stop reading it.
It was... yeah.
I saw something on Criminal Minds which made me flash to there... have you seen this episode?

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1560814/synopsis

yeah... you should (this is the synopsis... I think you can actually watch at least a teaser from there... not sure)

it was really creepy.
Your story is...as always... fascinatingly... wrong.
lol
Thanks Dean. Why don't you just post every Sunday and just not for the other days? I just get so irritated when I don't have a six to give you. Lol
Well done,
really.
*shake it off Cat*
Cat

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

I've never watched the first episode of Criminal Minds, my dear friend. In fact, I watch very little television at all. I will not miss The Walking Dead, on AMC (it's far more than "just" an apocalyptic zombie series), American Horror Story on FX, the old Twilight Zone and Alfred Hitchcock Presents episodes (whenever I'm lucky enough to find them on network TV), and Rod Serling's The Night Gallery, which comes on here in my neck-of-the-woods at 9:30 pm. That's about it as far as television is concerned. I used to watch Breaking Bad (LOVED IT!) until it ran its course, and a show called Monsters Inside Me. That last one you'll have to Google if you don't already know what it's about. It defies explanation, heh-heh.

Why do I not wait until Sunday to post, you asked? because, in reality, I could care less about receiving six star ratings as a motivation to entertain people. That's the most important aspect about writing..the "entertaining people" part of it. That's why I do what I do. That, and hopefully (if I'm lucky enough and have done my writing properly) scare the livin' daylights out of folks. For me, that's really what it's all about.

Thanks so much for your review. But, don't worry, Cat. I'm really quite a normal guy. My imagination's just a bit... warped, is all. Heh-heh-heh...
~Dean