Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

'They'd do their best to make you smile.
With pastel wings, they'd flit about,
land on your nose, your cheeks, your hands.
To you, they would be most devout...'

A very lovely addition to this poetry for Brooke. I, especially, enjoyed the above, Connie.

Hope you are doing well...

Bev

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much, Bev, for your lovely review and for pointing out your favorite lines. I hope to be around a little more now and can read more of your very fine writing.
My best to you.
Connie

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much, Bev, for your lovely review and for pointing out your favorite lines. I hope to be around a little more now and can read more of your very fine writing.
My best to you.
Connie

reply by Writingfundimension on 01-Jun-2015

You're very welcome, Connie, as always.

Hugs, Bev

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I see you found how to do it Connie. This is absolutely lovely and may I say she will love it. Who's too say there are no fairies? She might believe in them. We all join you in wishing her to have a speedy recovery, Hugs. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you, my dear friend, for both the lovely review and the help in posting this poem as a chapter to the book for Brooke. She is such a fixture on this site that it is really sad not having her around at the moment. At least you are still here! You are one of those on this site with whom I feel a closer connection. Don't go anywhere, okay?
Hugs,
Connie

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Lovely tribute to Brooke, sprinkled with the imagery she loves. I am sure so many people on this site are thinking of her and wish her well. Good use of rhyming and nice imagery. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much, Faye, for your very thoughtful review.
Connie

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Nice tribute sure she will enjoy. Your well written poem about fairies should more than brighten up her day. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for your review.
Connie

Comment from BellaSpirit

Excellent

What a magical gift of words written in hopes of healing. This special poem would make anyone feel better and give them encouragement to believe they can get well. Sometimes the spark of hope is the best medicine. Really pretty presentation! There is nothing I would suggest, it's perfect just the way it is.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review.
Connie

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Wonderful poem for Brooke, Connie. I know she'll love this one. I love the fairies on her nose... LOL! Great job with meter and rhyme here. Well done. :)

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you, my friend, for a lovely review.
It's always good to hear from you.
Connie

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

I too am hoping that Brooke has a speedy recovery, I wasn't aware until yesterday that she was unwell. An excellent piece, Connie, I enjoyed reading from beginning to end and I couldn't find any faults, your writing flowed well and I thought you used excellent imagery, thanks for sharing...Jacob

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much, Jacob, for a most thoughtful review.
Connie

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Dear Connie: the energy and power of your creativity and thoughts are rays of healing and gifts of compassion that I'm sure will touch the soul and heal the cells of our dear Brooke's struggling elements of life. Thank you for your love, your energy, and the compassion shown to another loving being such as Brooke! Such energy will indeed reflect back upon you as well.....at least from me, but I'm certain as well, many more...dear one! thank you! His Grayness: Vance

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you, Vance, for such a lovely review.
My best to you.
Connie