Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was very creative. You tell a detailed story with just 100 words. My only thought is the "friend" at the end struck me as a little "off" for some reason. But outside of that this was a terrific story. You say so much with so few words.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015

Thank you very much. Doctor Howler always looks forward to presenting his Nightmares and I will let him see your comments.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent picture that complements your story perfectly. Thanks for the foot note. I believe you that it is hundred words. Nice to pick a horror subject, a vampire stalking in the woods. At the end you inform us how we can stop him. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015

Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

Delightfully scary, A lot of chilling horror in 100 words. I will certainly sleep on a pillow of garlic, and I am off to see where I can buy silver bullets.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Glad you enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comments and support indeed.

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Short and sharp down to the pointed teeth I am not a lover of horror and zombies and the like. But vampires well that's another story.....

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good job! I like your little story. Good format, picture, and font. The story line is good. The story had a good tone, almost like a poem.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Vampires are interesting in stories and the movies. They scare and make people aware of evil. John 16:33, we need to rejoice that Jesus is in our lives. The youth are looking for adventure. Who do they know? Good awareness of writing for contest.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct word count and a complete story. You deliver an interesting narrative on the vampire in your few well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

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Comment from kiwisteveh

Good

An atmospheric little piece. Do I detect a rhyme or two, which might suggest that this started life as a poem?

'...cloak with gnashing fangs hanging out' would be a good example of what my old English teacher taught me was a mis-related phrase.

Maybe not enough 'story' to this to do well in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

The story to this is that it simply tells about what a vampire is. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a nice little poem / story that let's the stalker roam the streets once again. He's out of the high school and not jealous of wolf boy. He creeps at night and drains bodies of blood. Go vampire!

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments and support.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi writer,

You're still short by a couple of words. Remember the title doesn't count so you need two more words. It says that it must be EXACTLY 100 words long. Adding two more will give you 100 words.

MizKat

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for your comments.