Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10033 "Burning Hug a Bear"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Coral. We all make mistakes in times of stress and sadness, I've made many in my time mate, believe me. This is another very interesting time in you life my friend.
A couple of spags......
"Originally( I originally) took her with me when I left home on impulse,"
"During this time I occasionally received a little money from home, this was spent on my children(,) I was not allowed to see them and so sent to(-to) things to them in Salt Lake."
"Such empty things, without kids or much to eat, My(my) anger became out of control,"
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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G'day Coral. We all make mistakes in times of stress and sadness, I've made many in my time mate, believe me. This is another very interesting time in you life my friend.
A couple of spags......
"Originally( I originally) took her with me when I left home on impulse,"
"During this time I occasionally received a little money from home, this was spent on my children(,) I was not allowed to see them and so sent to(-to) things to them in Salt Lake."
"Such empty things, without kids or much to eat, My(my) anger became out of control,"
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you again?
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
This story is very interesting and shows deep emotion. I am sorry for what you went through and all you had to endure. It must have been difficult, and still I believe being a mother is one of the things you find most important. We are glad to have you as a friend here on this site. It is hard to share your feelings and experiences with other people!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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This story is very interesting and shows deep emotion. I am sorry for what you went through and all you had to endure. It must have been difficult, and still I believe being a mother is one of the things you find most important. We are glad to have you as a friend here on this site. It is hard to share your feelings and experiences with other people!
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you!
Writing gets mr through the times when my dang body wants to hurt.
Writing is such a good therapy, for me anyway.
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It's gotten me through some pretty rough times, too, my friend!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dear Friend, please don't feel ashame for something you didn't do. You were right to be angry and burning those things that your horrible family sent you, it was what anybody else would have done in the same sitation. I know I would.
You are a very loving and humble person that had a really bad life until now. It is a miracle that you are writing now and healing yourself with the words you put down on paper. I know first hand because I also had a bad situation when I was growing up and later on when I got married. I went from one dysfunctional relation to another never feeling worthy of a good life, until now; as you, I live alone, a simple life, but a good one, and I am finally at peace and I am able to face my past and live to tell about it.
Please think of me as a friend. You can write to me any time, and it will be just between you and me. I will be here for you.
Your writing was perfect, not a thing to change.
MariVal (my real name)
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Dear Friend, please don't feel ashame for something you didn't do. You were right to be angry and burning those things that your horrible family sent you, it was what anybody else would have done in the same sitation. I know I would.
You are a very loving and humble person that had a really bad life until now. It is a miracle that you are writing now and healing yourself with the words you put down on paper. I know first hand because I also had a bad situation when I was growing up and later on when I got married. I went from one dysfunctional relation to another never feeling worthy of a good life, until now; as you, I live alone, a simple life, but a good one, and I am finally at peace and I am able to face my past and live to tell about it.
Please think of me as a friend. You can write to me any time, and it will be just between you and me. I will be here for you.
Your writing was perfect, not a thing to change.
MariVal (my real name)
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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You are to good to me.
Can I ask what you went through?
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yes, I will send you a private message. :)
Comment from giftsun
You have an interesting story to tell. However, your punctuation is very bad. There are many places where you need commas or periods. So sometimes you have one sentence which should really be two separate sentences. If you go over it carefully and read it aloud, you should see what I mean. Correct them and this will be much easier to read.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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You have an interesting story to tell. However, your punctuation is very bad. There are many places where you need commas or periods. So sometimes you have one sentence which should really be two separate sentences. If you go over it carefully and read it aloud, you should see what I mean. Correct them and this will be much easier to read.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you, I learn from kind people like you.
