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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from judiverse
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I like your rhyme in this. Excellent work with your counting poems. This is an excellent subject--smiles and where they went--going to an unhappy boy, a homeless man, and animals, etc. So glad one found its way to Brooke. Hopefully, the memory book will bring her some smiles. Really enjoyable. judi

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you so much. I am glad you read and reviewed my poem [and that you liked it]. Jan
reply by judiverse on 30-May-2015
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from w.j.debi
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You made me go "Ahhh" at the end. I do hope that last smile finds Brooke. I am sure she will enjoy this counting poem. You mention a lot of great things that a smile can do and all the lives it can touch. This is a great tribute to Brooke.

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you for your support. I appreciate everything you said. Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Brooke wrote many counting poems, and she is bound to love this one of the 10 smiles. Well done on this one, it is a just the tonic Brooke needs to help her through this awful time she is having. :) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Thank you for the review and kind comments.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, jannypan, I am so glad you wrote this and the last one is my favorite and the next is the smile for the one who teaches God's word. thank you so much for the nod in the notes and for writing this

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    You are so welcome. Thank you for your time reading & reviewing my poem.
reply by sweetwoodjax on 29-May-2015
    I just wrote a counting poem, you inspired me and the words just rolled out. Ten Little Fairies. I forgot to add it to the book and the add chapter won't work now.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    You can PM Tom. Write the name of your poem AND the name of the book "Get well, Brooks" and ask him to add it. I have done so 3 times. He will fix it.
reply by sweetwoodjax on 29-May-2015
    thank you
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    sorry for the typo it is

    "Get well, Brooke"

    [I will blame the typo on the cat who was sitting in my lap. Love my kitties.]
Comment from pharp
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Janny,
I think this is the best of all, it brought a smile to my face as well as tears. I know Brooke will really like this one in her honor. You incorporated a great deal in this poem from the sad little boy, the homeless man, the lonely girl, until that one smile searched for Brooke, this is when my tears did flow. Thanks for sharing once again. LOL Portia

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    You inspire me. Thank you so much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello Jannypan. I found it! hahaha... I really like your poem and I see a series of poems about ten things :) Cool idea.

Let see, the rhyme was not consistant but the poem has a good sound. To me the message is about the power of smiles and how it affects people. It is so true!

My favorite line was [one for the animals with no sound hoping to avoid the pound] so sad :(

Good job with your poem!!

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking time to read/review my poem. Smiles are powerful when they are shared.
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Jan,

this is really a lovely poem dedicated to Brooke. She loved to write the count down poems especially for the children.
Your count down smiles with I am sure bring a smile to her face.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you so much. Your time is valuable, and I appreciate you reading/reviewing/commenting on my poem. Jan
Comment from reconciled
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HI Janny, a wonderful poem...Brooke is going to love this...I know she loves the count down poems...and she love to smile...so well thought of...love every word...very nicely written...beautiful artwork...love Michael

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I am so glad you liked it. Thank you so much.
Comment from emkoutny
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Another nice poem using your counting theme. The line that stuck out to me was verse four about the girl being bullied, as this is an experience I have had a lot of experience with both as an educator and a mother. Best of luck to Brooke. Medicine can do amazing things these days and I hope she is on the mend.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you for the review and kind comments.
Comment from JourneyHolm
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I love that you are giving out smiles! What a wonderful gift for humanity. I also appreciate the rhyme scheme throughout the entire poem. I think it makes it even better. A smile can change a life, just like this poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Here's a smile for you. Thank you so much. It is greatly appreciated.